Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
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Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
This is for anyone to hop on
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
not bad, this was pretty beasty dog. you had some witty punchlines, and some dope ass flows. Emotion was good too no doubt. im actually impressed wit how hard you came since im kinda used to your slow really emotional joints, so this was a real nice surprise.
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
I would like in on this. If its ku wit u lj
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
have at it man. let me know what you come up with
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
Mos def! Pm me ur email and ill shoot it over
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
hmm this is actually pretty nice bruh..quality decent too..
yeah punchlines were pretty dope..no doubt..
yeah i like it bruh....good shyt
yeah punchlines were pretty dope..no doubt..
yeah i like it bruh....good shyt
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
ok. heres my verse! anyone else?
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
Great job loon. If we can get another person on this we could have a dope song
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
Hell yea man. Maybe the first of more to come
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
Decent quality. You definitely have powerful presentation...you put energy behind what you spit, which is such an IMPORTANT factor in music today. You have to sound like you believe and really feel the lyrics that your spittin, and I feel like you did a decent job providing that feel. I kinda dig the vocals skips you threw in there, it had a Nikki Minaj kinda feel to it haha ...but I think that's dope. Decent track...with the right collaborating artists on here, it'll make a solid track for a mixtape. I'ma give this a 7/10
Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
daaaaamn. This shits fiyah! Seriously love this beat. Leroy - nice punches, quality was dope and love how you pieced this shit together. Tough emotion could really feel you goin off on this Loon - you killed this shit. Flow was amazing. Quality 100 and punches dope.
Really feelin this
Really feelin this
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
ayo save this collab for me i'ma download this.... i'll send my vocals to ya bro.... PM me...
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
Here's mine
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
IM GOING IIIIIN ON THIS!!!! recording monday or tuesday, and loon im gunna record that 'other' track too
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Re: Free Verse over the Childish Gambino "Bonfire" beat
Amazing.Loon E Lou wrote:ok. heres my verse! anyone else?
Love your verse.
Great flow. Great quality.
Love it.
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