Warrenton, MO Beat Produced By Enigma Beats
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pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
drunken jesus wrote:like the beat it's got a nice smooth vibe, you've improved alot since i last heard you you're delivery and flow is pretty polished now & lyrics are alot better, your presence is good but i think you could vary in tones of your delivery a bit (get/louder and angrier in parts & calmer in parts) it kinda stays the same throughout the track except the part @ around 2 minutes & the end, those parts sound good but the regular parts get a bit monotone, also your enunciation and clarity could've been a bit clearer, you don't mumble or slur or anything but theirs parts where you drift off or slightly mush words together some thicker doubles could bring them out a bit, while your flow is solid theirs some parts where your slightly off on the kick you land a lil bit after it usually in the off parts, & also on the flow i can obviously see/hear the way you were trying to rock it with a marching type flow on the downbeats but the drums in the beat are a bit stiff so flowing like that on them gets a lil choppy/robotic at times, i think if you loosened up on the flow a bit & varied tempos slightly while staying in the pocket it'd make your vocals stick out a bit more and sound less static
also i think if you added some delay/echo on the some of the last words/rhymes of bars it'd sound dope & fit in well with the tone & vibe of the track
kinda typed a shitload didn't mean to babble or seem overly critical but you should be able to hear what i mean i think fixing the shit i mentioned will really improve the replay value of the track but as-is this is a nice drop & you've seemed to develop a polished style that works but some loosening up and variation of your style will make it a bit more catchy and increase replay value of your songs
you ever record to that beat you asked for awhile back? get at me on aim or msn sometime if your interested in collabing on something new i have literally hundreds of beat skeletons & unfinished beats i can play thru & find something up your alley & customize it, since you go to a studio i could hook you up with tracked out wavs or high quality mp3's so you could get the beat mixed with your vocals for a better result sonically
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