First Installment

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Markb
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First Installment

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Let me know what u think, it's a year old now
but I'll release something newer at a later date

[soundclick]<div style="width:473px; border:solid #999999 1px; background-image:url('http://www.soundclick.com/images/elogos/SC_ExtBG.png')">
<a href='http://www.soundclick.com/MarkBMusik'>
<div style="background-color:width:460px; height:45px; cursor:pointer; background-image:url('http://www.soundclick.com/images/elogos/SC_460.png');"></div></a>
<div id="lower"><object type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowScriptAccess="never" allowNetworking="internal" height="60" width="473" data="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="allowScriptAccess" value="never" />
<param name="allowNetworking" value="internal" />
<param name="movie" value="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf" />
<param name="loop" value="false" />
<param name="menu" value="false" />
<param name="quality" value="high" />
<param name="wmode" value="transparent" />
<param name="flashvars" value="playType=single&songid=8331846&scid=8331846&q=hi&ext=1" />
<param name="scale" value="noscale" />
<param name="salign" value="b" />
<param name="bgcolor" value="#000000" />
</object></div></div>[/soundclick]
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Re: First Installment

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Umm. . .Is It Just Me Or Does This Happen To EVeryone? I've Clicked Play 4 Times, And Keep Getting "Error Loading Songfile(Undefined)" ??
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Re: First Installment

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sorry working link now
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Ite. . .First Off, Quality Is Overall Good But IDK If It's My Headphones Or Not. I'm Hearing MAD Clipping On Words Like "World" Or Mostly Any Words You Say With An "o" In Them. May Be Just Me Lol. Good Multiz Tho. I'm Feelin Tha Approach And Energy. Kinda Reminded Me Of DMX When You First Started, But Then You Changed It Up So Yeah "My Flows Outta This World But I Still Keep Earth In Its Place" I Really Like That Line. Wish We Coulda Heard The Whole Song Instead Of A Snippet With Your Verse.
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Re: First Installment

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I didnt actually make this a whole track
It was only a sample just to see what outcome I'd produce

Thanks for the feed back, glad you liked it
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Just like Double S said.. You sounded little like DMX starting and then fell of that into a different flow... and was that a different artist that said like the last word? also it would be nice to hear a longer one.. so get crackin man.. not bad so far
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yeah he clipped alot lol... i'd turn the dubs down n the sound effects down too... n compress the vocals... rode the beat well... too bad it was only a short clip coulda been some good hip hop... nice work
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Re: First Installment

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You were unique so that's good. You need to work on your delivery though, make it more clear. Maybe that was your quality. Can't really give feed on the lyrics cause it was hard to understand you.
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