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-TraMaTiK-
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Take It All

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been a while since ive been in this area so i thought id drop somethin solo that i just did. yall mostly hear me in collabs an never str8 out so im tryna get back into the groove of this. feed will be apperciated and returned.

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Re: Take It All

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this is much better than what i've heard from u man.... hook is cool... the verses when u added the stabs repeating the last word of the verse kinda annoying... tryin to go for that Bun B feel... wasn't really feelin that... verses were good tho... did u mix this??? newayz much props from what i've heard from u man... give this a 7/10 good shit... just work on the stabs... peace
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Re: Take It All

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funny thing is i never listen'd to bun b haha but ya i thought it sounded decent at the time but i see what u mean it is annoyin lol. and ya i mixed it all myself,apperciate the feed man! uppin

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Re: Take It All

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beats mellow..

..sounds clean..pretty steady on da flo like the lyrics alot...

sound really crisp ..i agree with law ya deliv's gettin better..props for that..

uhmm maybe you should do a second backup on the "take it" in the hook..give it a lil body.. other than that
elevation is a proper reason to be proud of this one...stay on ya grind T..1
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Re: Take It All

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Good Shit Man, Nice Style..lol

Yeah You've Came A Long Way On The Audio Tip Since The Last Track I Heard From Ya, An That Was A While Ago. Keep Doin Ya Thing Man.
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Re: Take It All

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Best track I've heard you drop....EVERRRR. Talk about a huuuuuge growth! You're finally beginning to find that piece of yourself inside that can put tracks together. Whatever you're doin...stick with it. Quality was better, ad-libs were more on point, doubles were lined up nicely.
Really enjoyed not only the track, but your elevation as well.

8.5/10
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