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Post by RAJE »

updated version.

they say every story has closure... i found mine... and thats what the second verse speaks about.

now lookin for feed on this if you could people.

i know i can't sing... but i tried lol
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Post by K KiLLaH »

For Your Concept You Picked Out a Sick Ass Beat Whats The Original Track?
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no idea mate, its a sinima beat called "stray shots"
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Post by SolQet »

i really feel dis. nice drop RAJE
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Post by RAJE »

updated the audio file, new verse and redone the first one
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Post by TreTru »

ayy this Hook is siiik..did you do that?
if so this shyt is doooope..ya doin alot better
the presence is good..and delivery is way better.
the flo is aight and ya had me when the hook came so
that's def what you need at least..
probably the 2nd verse was best IMO..the singin
or bridge in the 3rd verse didnt compliment the song..

but all in all this was a prob ya best drop..i heard...
keep doin ya thing man..1
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Post by RAJE »

thanks tre, nah the beat and hook were sampled by sinima.

thanks for the feed man, appreciate it,

i wasn't sure bout the "singing" either... but figured i'd leave it in to try something different
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