updated version.
they say every story has closure... i found mine... and thats what the second verse speaks about.
now lookin for feed on this if you could people.
i know i can't sing... but i tried lol
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ayy this Hook is siiik..did you do that?
if so this shyt is doooope..ya doin alot better
the presence is good..and delivery is way better.
the flo is aight and ya had me when the hook came so
that's def what you need at least..
probably the 2nd verse was best IMO..the singin
or bridge in the 3rd verse didnt compliment the song..
but all in all this was a prob ya best drop..i heard...
keep doin ya thing man..1
if so this shyt is doooope..ya doin alot better
the presence is good..and delivery is way better.
the flo is aight and ya had me when the hook came so
that's def what you need at least..
probably the 2nd verse was best IMO..the singin
or bridge in the 3rd verse didnt compliment the song..
but all in all this was a prob ya best drop..i heard...
keep doin ya thing man..1
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Big Island Crypt
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/first ... 11676.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/okay- ... 12393.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tre-t ... 12597.html
http://www.zshare.net/download/6399071566e45a94/
^^Hustle Life Mixx Tape^^
[align=center][/align]
Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hgN0MacRqg&feature=fvst[/video]
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IZ-VXwki ... ature=plcp[/video]
It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla
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