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Post by Viral »

Back when the Creation Chamber was still in it's early stages...2 Rappers came through and flooded the thread and dominated the Audio section with early collaborations.

It's been over 2 yrs...

The return of superman and batman




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Post by - Mutual - »

beat was dope
the hook was str8 strange but i felt it
the lyrics was quite good rode the beat well
nice the way you kept changin tempo slightly
shyt this is felt it had a dope feel to it
keep'em comin Viral

Kurse ya verse was dope the flow
was fire and the vocab was pretty good
and the presence was dope too
this was dope overall nicely done guys
keep'em comin
i would preciate feed on my track "right now"
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Lawgix »

this was fucking SIIIIIIIICKKKKKK.... holy fuck Kurse u upped alot vocab wise!!!! hook was fuckin str8 fire... haha Superman & Batman... shit was totally siiiick... leave them haters shook... FUCK EM!!!! lol good shit guys.... 8.5/10 cause i don't give 10's lol but i was bumpin this shit at work haha...
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Post by K.O. »

lawgix your mom is an 8.5 lol
I was there for the recording and kurse literally was shittin on the mic and he ran out of toilet paper. ill.
Viral snapped crackled and popped on this hook. SHITS BONANZA!!!!
Third Verse shines the most IMO.
ender was classic.
"and the only time you're hard is when you're rubbin it out"
^ That IS the DEFINITION of SWAG.
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K.O. wrote:lawgix your mom is an 8.5 lol
your mom is a 10 A FUCKING 10!!!! <<< (if u dunno what thats from its what Billy Bob from Varsity Blues said to his teacher who was a stripper at night...)
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Post by Dead Silence »

DAMMMMMN
this shit was fuckin tight
not lie
Kurse!
Kurse my boi!
remeber when i said u rap the same way
this was different
this was FIRE compare to ur other shit

and Virl
Oh Viral.
ur shit was straight raw
beat was off the hook
the chorus was outstading
love the fast paced rapping at the end of it


outstanding my sons :-|

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Lawgix wrote:
K.O. wrote:lawgix your mom is an 8.5 lol
your mom is a 10 A FUCKING 10!!!! <<< (if u dunno what thats from its what Billy Bob from Varsity Blues said to his teacher who was a stripper at night...)
same movie different quote..... I DON'T WANT YOU'RE LIFE. LMFAO @ JAMES VANDERBEEK HE KINDA LOOKS LIKE VIRAL. HAHAH LAWGIX YA MOM LOOKS LIKE ALI LARTER IN THE WHIPPED CREAM CHERRY PUSSY UNDERWEAR SCENE....IN OTHERWORDS your mother is a 12 A FUCKING TWELVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL JP

Viral & Kurse = knucklebabycentral

good shit once again my fellow labelmates.
you both came with that heat.
im sick of telling you both that.
so go fuck yourselves.
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Post by Viral »

thanks yall..much appreciated...ill def return the feed...
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

lol at my sons, nice work guys

yall collabin reminds me of em an dre sorta..not cuz of color obviously lol but when yall get 2gether its bound to be good. u compliment each others style which is always nice. not too much to say others havent. keep droppin yall
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Post by Revil »

yeah this beat was some bouncy typa shit, i like the hook, nice and simple and complex at the same time. perfect fit.
viral - nice mic presence, i like how your comfortable with what your saying, not a lot of OOO typa punches, but it was solid as shit.
kurse - remind me of a proof type of style, some outta the ordinary typa sound to your whole flow.
id like to hear some harder lines, but its definately a cd player track. good work
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Post by TreTru »

dude shyt shit is bananazzzz..for real...that hook is insane...
fuckin delivery is ridiculous dawg..much respect .


viral was crazy on the hook..
virals verse was on point
kurse killed his verse too..
beat was on fire..nice..
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Post by HKX »

HI HAHA wats good nigga yo 1st time I heard dis I was like damn Viral got off on dis shit my nigga krazy as BRAZILIAN FLOW dawg haha dis whole track was sick, I see Kurse come off on it as well shit matched out wit Viral shit as well ya'll both snapped much props my nigga MUTHAFUCKIN 20 FUCK A DIME NIGGA HAHA
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Post by Viral »

thanks for da feed yall its much appreciated...if i havent returned feed for ne of u..ill get to dat soon....UPPIN for more feed
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