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Post by Dead Silence »

Mix Wit 2pac in it
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Post by Kurse »

The concept is in the right piece of mind...

...but it in NO WAY fits the beat. Sorry to say, but this sounds like shit.

Pac is turning in his grave cursing your name.

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Post by Young K »

i second that...

not good, ruins the meaning of the verses

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Post by drunken jesus »

Rap?

No You Can't
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by drunken jesus »

oh listened to it, its not you rapping its just the pac changes acapella over this

yeah doesn't vit the vibe at all, in fact its the opposite of the vibe of the track, & its on and offbeat

beat/hook is dope though props to whoever did it
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Elizabeth »

lol that first post jesus typed was funny. The song mixing wasnt that good but the original one is probably better.

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