Hey man, I would leave feedback on all of your drops but im not very good at giving it, Since i dont know too much about lyricism and all of its components. But from my point of view (a guy that likes reading all these diffrent styles of rapping ) Id say this was good, Your vocab was impressive But ...

i think a 13year old boy who listens to wayne all the time..
Sorry bro, Not diggin this at all

Aint nuttin gay about some jungle fever!

I was feelin this whole thing man, like most of your drops
Tho. i thought the flow in the first verse was kinda sketchy at times, In general the whole thing was sick ,
The second verse especially stood out to me.
I could see the emotion you put in it.

I give it a 8/10

Cant wait for part 2 !

Yeaa man definatly is diffrent from the usual around here . I LIKE IT I thought the flow was pretty consistant throughout and i liked the vocab Fav bars : my mailbox keep staying let down, left out, hate mail, shed doubt with the power to light up anything that left me let down leave em dead...bored...

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HAha i like your style man, The hook is sick
The whole piece in general is ill

Good job man, You got any mixtapes that i could download?

Ahaha ight man imma be waitin for it!

FINALLY DAAMN.
I been waitin on a drop from you for a while now

anyways I think it flows very well, But I don't understand the message behind it (if their is one.)

you can do aloot better!
NOW FLOOD THE SCRIPTS WITH YOUR SHIT HOMIE.

FINALLY MAN I BEEN WAITING FOR SOME RUCKUS SHIT.

And the piece seems pretty ill like usual.
A few bars are a bit streched but its well done,
Like Joey said, Nothing really crazy or stands out

(This is a poem a girl wrote for me a long time ago.. I just found it today while i was cleaning out my room. It was a sheet of paper that she gave me when we were younger... I Posted this here because i wanted to see if you guys could see the emotion behind it like i did.) Eight hours to myself, to...

Bees sting actors

nerds hate rafters

haha wow man this is amazing, for some reason I read this like a christmas carol (sumtin like t'was the night before christmas) don't know why lol

I can't believe I'm actually innit tho, that was a big surprize plex, thanks haha.

Words slay bastards