I read the first 2 bars/verses more like a poem more then a rap... not bad.. real smooth but could have more depth and emotion based on the topic... then the last verses were more in depth and more lyrical... but the rhymes schemes didnt work well... see potential here though so keep up also be sure...

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lol she was watching a show on a dvd player so no way to inject the file hence just reading the subs as they go... and those are just normal subs not the translated ones... english in english.... spanish in spanish....

lol here ya go 162 00:10:32,067 -> 00:10:34,367 My son, All is well. 163 00:10:34,434 -> 00:10:36,000 We'll help you. 234 00:13:59,434 -> 00:14:02,601 Mariel, these are my friends I told you. 235 00:14:02,667 -> 00:14:05,400 Sergeant Doakes And Detective Morgan. 236 00:14:05,467 -> 00:14:08,033 Can ...

lmao... nice... i love it when people get exposed as "SUICIDAL OVERWEIGHT WHITE GIRL"s

i think this battle was very close... infact almost right down the middle in almost every cat... except creativity being givin to 4dub... because defiance is correct smalls you fed of dudes verse and honestly you still really couldnt out do him... so with that being said... 4dub gets my vote in this...

yep p wins 4-0 KO closed and updated

links http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/el-vs-cbk-vt25336.html http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/smalls-uno-vs-4dub-vt25330.html ok lets go... im built ta win while u, well your just a another notch or tally i'll stomp ya badly, watch as i BODY SMALLS like im a COP IN CALI u need ta face the facts, ...

i will battle you also... if ur down

hhhhmmmmmm!!!! well as i see it... this battle wasnt very good punches were simple and played(bad combo) from both... but someone must get my vote sooooo punches... im a say that cbk... his lines were less played, and forced then el's... not by much though flow... cbk again... the way i read it el h...

YOU ARE RIGHT AND IT IS NOW CLOSED

SpawnTrueForm wins via KO closed and updated

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48 hrs till closed then deleted

both of you need to post 2 links to battles that you voted on if there are no active battles ready for votes leave feed on 1 written and post the link.... 24 hrs to post link(s) or the thread will be locked until they are sent to me... thanks