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Dude, you got some mad fucking writing... This was pretty clean, some of it didn't feel so on topic, but it IS open to interpretation, I'm assuming. With that being said, I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Next time, with a piece such as this, all I'd say is try to make it longer. Dope, stay up.
Yeah, I agree with Glam on this one. A few times it threw me off, but nothing really off setting, it was a refreshing lil piece. Nice to see some emotional content here, always takes the mind back. Stay up.
CBK, elevation is a steady and gradual thing, and I feel like you've done a great deal of it in a short amount of time, so props for that. Mostly, I say fuck a structure, just write how it comes, but I'm picking up on some pretty sick flow in this piece and some nice multies, too. Keep at it, bruh. ...
Lol this shit was crazy off the wall, but like everyone else said, it was pretty much on point with everything from flow to presence to presentation. I "LOL"'d a good bit cause this shit was deranged. Haha. Good shit, man. Props.
Yeah, I read this before, and I've got to say that, personally, I thought you wrecked it. It's full of too many quotables for me to even begin quoting. I wouldn't suggest changing a thing, it was on point with multies and the flow was pretty fucking smooth. The content also stayed true to the title,...
I've got to be completely honest. This shit was the most off the wall, idiotic piece of trash I've ever read, my guy. And I'm normally nice with feed, I can normally look over the inherent flaws of every lyricist in order to allow for the growth of their respective writing styles and room for elevat...
- Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:13 pm
- Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
- Topic: Truth or Dare
- Replies: 37
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Lol, it's not possible for me to do that, at the moment, though. Anything else that doesn't require special clothing? Or special anything, for that matter. Haha. Cause I'm at work.
- Sun Nov 20, 2011 4:50 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: SMOKE SESSION CYPHER spit about smoking plz
- Replies: 31
- Views: 5893
Menu rolls the pine to stoke his mind, With two bowls behind, a smokin line, I choke, it's fine, my throat's divine, Indo designed through hope and time, Get the Garcia broke the gar and me elope, To steepest slopes, far and deep we blow, Unarmed we beat ghosts of stresses we know, Blessed with gree...
Right off the bat, this newcomer is noticable. I actually dug this style/technique, bruh. It's as though I don't see it very often, and alot of it was pretty tight. Despite the structuring being odd to me, I like it. Drop some more, but remember to feed two pieces to every one dropped. Rules and all...
MonuMental can also refer to himself from the third person, and pretend to be his very own imaginary secretary. And edit his post to make it seem as though it's been edited...which it has...