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by Kau the Lion
Mon Jan 16, 2012 3:38 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Emtu vs SpawnTrueForm (Spawn wins KO)
Replies: 6
Views: 1847

Re: Emtu vs SpawnTrueForm (READY 4 VOTES)

Cat sweep to Spawn. He took every category convincingly. Even though some of his wordplay was a stretch he still had a lot of good punches and Emtu didn't. He had some decent attempts at wordplay but nothing that punched really hard.

+1 SpawnTrueForm
by Kau the Lion
Tue Jan 10, 2012 12:29 am
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Did you miss me?
Replies: 4
Views: 959

Re: Did you miss me?

Shit died after the crash. Hopefully we can get some steam going again.
by Kau the Lion
Sun Jan 01, 2012 12:55 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Consistency
Replies: 3
Views: 687

Re: Consistency

Flow was decent but I felt like this piece could've used more wordplay and punchlines. Multies were a bit simple, too. Overall, not bad. Just needs to kick it up a notch. Keep working at it.
by Kau the Lion
Tue Dec 27, 2011 1:07 pm
Forum: Illest Slug Fest
Topic: PBL Week Two: GhostWriDa001 -VS- Kau the Lion
Replies: 3
Views: 1002

Re: PBL Week Two: GhostWriDa001 -VS- Kau the Lion

It's been over a week. I'm just going to post my shit. I’m the type to excel so I’ll write him an “L”. He’ll be griping as well as get spiteful as hell. We don’t buy what you sell. How you gonna ghost write if you can’t even write for yourself?! This Ghost “writer” needs a ghost spell check. I’m hel...
by Kau the Lion
Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:44 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: word 2
Replies: 5
Views: 598

Re: word 2

I didn't like it as much as word one but still pretty good. Flow was consistent. A few of the rhymes weren't as impressive, though. Felt like you spent a little less time on this one. Overall, a nice drop, though.
by Kau the Lion
Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:32 am
Forum: Illest Slug Fest
Topic: PBL Week Two: GhostWriDa001 -VS- Kau the Lion
Replies: 3
Views: 1002

Re: PBL Week Two: GhostWriDa001 -VS- Kau the Lion

Did Ghost ever submit? I sent my bars last Sunday.
by Kau the Lion
Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:47 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Demonic Enigma
Replies: 7
Views: 1207

Re: Demonic Enigma

I'm digging the crazy rhyme schemes and nice use of vocab here. The only line I didn't really like was the Hell of a guy pun. Felt a little goofy and out of place compared to the rest of the drop. The flow was smooth all through-out. Some parts felt a little nonsensical but I'll give you the benefit...
by Kau the Lion
Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:56 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Nightmare after Christmas
Replies: 12
Views: 1643

The Nightmare after Christmas

A Christmas collab with zombies. Each verse is from a different character perspective. We started this last year and it never got finished (hence the verse from Cadence.) Quix decided to help us get this wrapped up. Kuhlerblynd(Zombie) I don't know what happened, it's like I was trapped in the caske...
by Kau the Lion
Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:54 am
Forum: Illest Slug Fest
Topic: PBL Week Two: Enlightend -VS- AntiMatter
Replies: 12
Views: 2176

Re: PBL Week Two: Enlightend -VS- AntiMatter

Light got more punches in there. Anti's punches were really good but he had filler set-ups. Light had wordplay in every line. Anti had better multies and still kept a decent flow. Light's flow was good, too, though his multies were simpler.

+1 Enlightened
by Kau the Lion
Fri Dec 16, 2011 1:34 am
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: "Things Not To Stick In Your Pee Hole"
Replies: 166
Views: 19723

Re: "Things Not To Stick In Your Pee Hole"

The letter "T"
by Kau the Lion
Fri Dec 16, 2011 12:43 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Self-Esteam
Replies: 13
Views: 1524

Re: Self-Esteam

Thanks for the feed, guys.
by Kau the Lion
Thu Dec 15, 2011 10:04 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Collectively Skilled ... Alvin & Loon E Lou
Replies: 14
Views: 2270

Re: Collectively Skilled ... Alvin & Loon E Lou

Can't believe I haven't listen to this until now. Both deliveries we're on point. Al, I think your flow was just a tad off in about two or three parts, but only minor quibbles, there. Nice shit, overall. Collectively Ill, holding it down.
by Kau the Lion
Thu Dec 15, 2011 10:00 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: I'm back
Replies: 3
Views: 645

Re: I'm back

Nice flow. Some decent concepts there. Nothing too substantial, though. Keep it up.
by Kau the Lion
Thu Dec 15, 2011 9:59 am
Forum: The Topic Thunder Tournament
Topic: TTT: Round Two - Enders -VS- Quix (Ready for VOTES)
Replies: 17
Views: 3273

Re: TTT: Round Two - Enders -VS- Quix

Storytelling: Quix Imagery: Quix Creativity: Enders Multies: Tie Flow: Quix I think Quix just edged it overall. I felt like I was more in tune with his character than Enders. Enders was no slouch, though. I liked the perspective he used but Quix' presentation was just smoother and more vivid. +1 Quix

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