Incredible drop, complexity. I'm inspired to drop my own 100 bars now.Or Maybe ill do 50…100's overwhelming for me just thinking about it
Like Hazard said 100 bars of consistent flow is something few writers can do.


“let's get back to the initial theme, how you set unrealistic dreams
its ...

^votes plz

Phe-Lines – Feline (Lions are Feline)
Pride- Group of Lions



Ok,


TreTru, You Think it's Safe to Play Rude with a Dude who'd Break You? You Couldn't “Cat Sweepâ€

Compared to some shit he dropped in the cypher this was pretty good. (Seriously go look at that shit n you'll see)
Lmao @the pushin up daisies line. Not bad, but it's not good enough for you to be talking down on Duce's shit. Seriously.

But Who Bumps Wayne?
The Little White Girls Right LoL.
Thats Most Of His Fan Base .. ( That Buys His Albums )

EXACTLY!!!!!!!!!! I don't know one street dude that says he LIKES Lil Wayne... its all fuckin Hip-Pop for girls and wannabe lil wanksters... thats all hes got and thats all he targets ...

^Preciate the bar by bar breakdown. More people should do that. I prefer constructive criticism over anything else, because my creativity right now isn't great, I'm naturally biased against my own lyrics so I need someone to tell me if my shits whack or not..lol
And By the way..




ANY line that ...

Quix wrote:COOL ^^^



But i am CALLING you BOTH out now!!


prove how weak i am!!!!

lmfao.

nice run though, quix.

whos next?

Exemplary, has to wait till we get through

Didn't i allready beat you once







start 11:18

This FOOL WILL DIE when mah TOOL COLLIDE; n make a POOL OF PRIDE
you ain't COOL SO CRY!! plus i'm the 'Man for Punches' like the FuKiN KOOL AID GUY!
I'll have you DECEASED OR SLIT! you could RECIEVE A WISH and STIIIL won't even SUCCED A BIT
i'll ...

LOL, only competition uve had since me was Ekoms, so I though I'd give it another try. Uppin for votes

lmfao real quick, 5 minute key

I Could “Take a Dumpâ€

I'm Like an American Idol in Preliminary Trials – Show up wearing a Smile as Well as a Rifle
What the hell is a Rival? – Or maybe you meant Victim – I put more dots on your head than the Entire Nation of Islam.
Niggaz break and I Fix Em' Without knowin' They Symptons – I Just Put a Cartridge ...

Definitely quix, i didnt understand what the fuck that other dude was saying.

^I'm with CB on this one. I'm going to bump his shit just to rub it in peoples faces.

V/Quix
more thought out punches.