Life is just one big ass chess match Now I've heard you speak of pawns and kings but...honestly you've forgotten the in between You've painted scenes of mindless masses attending [/quote]mindless masses[quote] while masterminds pass us without attracting glances but What makes a knight differentiati...

Honestly your mediocre motives make no sense. Why would you test the best when your best bet's just to bet on the best thats like orlando magic "rushing" just to tackle the jets Im in a different ballpark boy get back on the bench you think your rippin but the difference is I know how to v...

"shit shat n shun to split splat n run"

I liked this rhyme scheme and woulda liked to see more on that flow. Pretty smooth reading throughout and some good visuals.

7.5/10 this was a good off the top to read on my boring ass easter sunday. Keep it up.

Thanks for the feedback guys. I really appreciate it and I will try to do more rap as well as poetry.

Now if nothing comes from what I wrote At least I know I got a good poem :lol: Now I've been told there is lots of fish well obviously but she's the prettiest note in the symphony Strait up She's pretty from the neck up with a minimal amount of makeup She's not an A cup but a step below C Got this m...

Life is just one big ass chess match Now I've heard you speak of pawns and kings but...honestly you've forgotten the in between You've painted scenes of mindless masses attending [/quote]mindless masses[quote] while masterminds pass us without attracting glances but What makes a knight differentiati...