Welcome. Bring your friends bring your grandma bring your dog we don't discriminate (unless you knock on our door with religion's penis in your mouth)

The rhymes we're lackluster to me but that likely isn't the focus. There seemed to be a good sense of emotion. Definitely a relatable subject for many and bits and pieces illustrated images. Sounds like it was off the top and I can respect that. There's more power and captivation in a story from the ...

Thanks. This was just whatever came to mind as I typed. Kind of had no real direction besides just a big exhale of "welp this is it. This is where we're at now. So let me just pay homage. Oh and what's this.. (reads my old content) damn I was trash, I should've listened to Jesus." Lol if people ...

,"Every night I’m depressed fighting the stress
Even at the height of my success
My life was a mess full of chaos and dread
I pray in my head that I wake up in bed"

The main bars that stood out. There were a few interesting things said here and there but overall it was very spotty.

Let's be honest, this place needs to remain in the rubble, none of us made it, a bunch of no names with fame in a bubble, if i'm center stage, it's to juggle, almost every single day is a struggle, beneath the thunder and clouds we drown under the crowd, but somehow, we're all the same collective ...

never knew the site was back up, so im super late on the feedback, but i personally was not feelin this, rhymescheme is there but just not my cup of tea personally, i couldn't vibe with more than half of it

im sure everyone can more or less relate to this, i was actually hoping for some multi syllabic rhymes but that's just me, and this is you