I can definitely agree with what your saying so I understand. I do read a lot and I also do use a thesaurus as well. You made a great point and I appreciate the feed. I just don't know, maybe being extremely complex isn't the thing up here on the Illest. Thanks for your honesty though.

Well I just listened to the beat, and that verse you wrote seems to have a pretty fast cadence to it. I would love to hear you spit it, because for the most part everything you said sounds pretty dope in my head. I love your vocabulary and the delivery was great too. I just think that some lines ...

[center] Practice Makes Perfect Or Better... [/center][center] To belabor to the neighbors enabling me to make it
Through anal assimilated groups daily is an insatiable task
For the kangaroos, rapacious and fat
From the gorillas who will kill us to voracious giraffes
On the daily I'm paraded with ...

Based on everything that was said above it seems like you have even written better pieces then this one, but it doesn't matter. I'm glad that you're maintaining it's always good for a lyricist to keep writing. This piece is still great though, I like your awareness of the world and your nonchalant ...

Dominioland!!! Sounds pretty dam fun lol. This piece was great, I enjoyed your imagination a lot.The imagery, punchlines, multi's and all. I look forward to reading more of your written work. Kudos!

Thank you it means A LOT. Especially coming from a lyricist such as yourself. I really appreciate it. I will stay up.

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[center]Practice Makes Perfect Or Better... [/center] [center]This day is a day of the disdained
The day of the mislaid things that have been maimed
The day of the assuaging poets who will get played
The vigorous ignorance that really can afflict brains
Intense pains to be a proficient big name
In ...

Imagery is your middle name! I loved the pictures you painted with this piece and your song went right to the beat. Which was another thing I loved, Jules-Watts is dope. The only negatives I have about this piece was that at times I couldn't follow certain lines, it seemed like to many words were in ...

I liked this piece and the message you were getting across. Every line was on beat and that instrumental sounds like the feelings you were trying to express. So overall, it was a pretty nice piece I just wish your multi's could've gotten in there a little more. That's just me though. Keep writing!!!

[center] Practice Makes Perfect Or Better... [/center] [center]If I ever the knew the basic fundaments of aeronautics
I would dare a pilot to embark on all my cherished knowledge
On a mechanism I invented to prepare the body
For a blast off into space like a military rocket
To share the goblet of ...

I like. Honestly, I just wish it was more presentable, but that's just me. Good multi's and good punchlines. I could feel the charisma while reading it lol. You should spit it over a beat or something.

This collaboration is a monument that was built by two great emcees lol. I'm wack I know, but the synergy between both of you guys was awesome. I feel like both of the verses related to the topic and brought that heat. Multi's were popping on both sides. Good shit.