Oi, what? I thought we were waiting on a topic.

I can has files as well?

This is just...this is just dope. Love the guitar. Oh, and the rest of it.

Weed Mall - http://www.shadowville.com/122483/genre ... ugh-it-all

Perfect Love - http://www.shadowville.com/122483/genre ... ugh-it-all

Hydroponic Shit - http://www.shadowville.com/122480/genre ... s/co-pilot

This was a hella emotional piece man, loved it. Can't really say a bad word about it. It was raw, honest, kept my attention, you had good vocab and flow, and painted a really intricate picture, man, great job.


Please record?

6 bars, due at some point in the sun's life cycle.

This guy claims to be a hardened Cold Blooded Killer
While all of his cuts are bargained Dull Muddled Filler

Change your name to DNR, I think it'd fit your brain better
The doctors get the call, Do Not Resuscitate's the main letters

And you call ...

Your flow makes me happy. Reminds me of some really good old school shit. Apart from a couple parts where you jumbled a few words or lost your mic presence, your rhythm and flow were tight the whole way through. I feel the chorus could use a bit more separation from the verses, but you actually did ...

FEED: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/freestyle-feed-if-you-want-vt25913.html#p192367
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/resent-first-verse-vt25909.html#p192366


I wrote this loosely to the Bet I beat (the song by B.O.B.).

My timescapes altered
Landscape faltered
Never was a halt heard
And those ...

The beginning really got me, got lost somewhere in the middle, and then I got back into it at the end. Some of your rhymes seemed really forced, or just a bit of a stretch. Your vocab is pretty good and there were some stand out lines in there, and you had a consistent flow.

As I said before, me likey. Topic is to my preference, vocab is great as is your imagery, and the flow is pretty consistent as well.


Don't let me believe in the sea when I'll drown when you leave,
Stay out of the artery on my sleeve so I can finally be free,
But here I am, chin above water ...

*cough*

Hi there.

Also, I can't stop staring at your avatar.

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The link ...

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Just click on the link and you can play it there.

That beat is fucking amazing. If you're willing, I'm down for a collab or something.

EDIT: Reuploaded with redone vocals. Hopefully it sounds a bit better now.


My 3rd song. Feed would be appreciated

The beat is "Ready For Action" by The Unbeatables.



The foundations crack as I enter the room
Your jaw drops more with every pulse from the gloom
A nocturnal emergence out of my ...