Search found 16 matches
- Wed Nov 23, 2011 9:47 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Collectively ILL Collab / Text & Audio
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3829
Re: Collectively ILL Collab / Text & Audio
that beat is nice and the flows where on point i like the hateful/dark sound to it.. raw shit.. yall are def. doing your thing
- Tue Nov 22, 2011 3:14 am
- Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
- Topic: WORD ASSOCIATION!
- Replies: 160
- Views: 72592
- Tue Nov 22, 2011 3:01 am
- Forum: Hip Hop Discussion
- Topic: What Track Are You Bumping?
- Replies: 1535
- Views: 182110
Re: What Track Are You Bumping?
vinnie paz- razorblade salvation... what yall know about that vinnie paz
- Tue Nov 22, 2011 2:56 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Vengeance Applied Vol 1... A heated Rage
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1666
Re: Vengeance Applied Vol 1... A heated Rage
that was ill man i like it flowed nice and i liked the rhyme scheme. not really anything to fix up from what i see
- Tue Nov 22, 2011 2:50 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: One last night
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1327
One last night
one of those days so heres a freewrite its a little messy cause i just wrote and never went back just let it all go another night grippin the knife wishing tonight could be the night i finnally end my life// bites of kryptonite the mirror is only hatrid in my sights//so i grab the knife i dim the li...
Re: Feelin It
the flow is to the beat besides a couple forced rhymes in the second verse but i was still feeling it very good drop.
- Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:24 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: This Feelin
- Replies: 27
- Views: 20072
Re: This Feelin
the flow was great man and the story def was told not that i needed to know about your mornings ha. but def rating that 10/10 man didnt hear anything that wasnt on point or off flow.
- Sat Nov 19, 2011 3:21 pm
- Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
- Topic: WORD ASSOCIATION!
- Replies: 160
- Views: 72592
Re: WORD ASSOCIATION!
river
- Sat Nov 19, 2011 3:02 pm
- Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
- Topic: WORD ASSOCIATION!
- Replies: 160
- Views: 72592
Re: WORD ASSOCIATION!
punches
- Sat Nov 19, 2011 3:00 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Bite Back
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4093
Re: Bite Back
thanks for the feed back, and yeah i know what your saying im still getting the hang of this site so ill slowly become more active.
-- Sat Nov 19, 2011 12:00 am --
thanks for the feed back, and yeah i know what your saying im still getting the hang of this site so ill slowly become more active.
-- Sat Nov 19, 2011 12:00 am --
thanks for the feed back, and yeah i know what your saying im still getting the hang of this site so ill slowly become more active.
- Sat Nov 19, 2011 2:36 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Bite Back
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4093
Bite Back
trying to get some of my things out there so heres a fresh freewrite for you tell me what you think. sorry about the spelling it isnt my strong point. envy fuels the nonsence thru false contexts// shits preplex and we make it more complex// screaming and throwing objects// mind is fulla shit but not...
- Sat Nov 19, 2011 6:46 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: No tears
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2856
Re: No tears
thanks for the feedback and the welcome
- Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:44 pm
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: 1 bar cypher
- Replies: 202
- Views: 55701
Re: 1 bar cypher
stay-forever-clever decypher and sever-letters//
pray-for better-weather and never say never//
pray-for better-weather and never say never//
- Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:31 pm
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: SMOKE SESSION CYPHER spit about smoking plz
- Replies: 30
- Views: 21919
Re: SMOKE SESSION CYPHER spit about smoking plz
my mind stays sky high,
half blind cant see out my damn eyes,
got me chinky lookin slanted vison why lie,
get the blunt again and im still hittin i feel fine,
4 blunts and a big bowl pack now im feelin nice,
laughin at the sound of reality gigglin at life,
half blind cant see out my damn eyes,
got me chinky lookin slanted vison why lie,
get the blunt again and im still hittin i feel fine,
4 blunts and a big bowl pack now im feelin nice,
laughin at the sound of reality gigglin at life,
- Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:18 pm
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: No tears
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2856
No tears
i felt the pain but invisoned happiness still felt the same so i went to the cabinets popped the top of the bottle to stop the madness swallowed every last one and collapsed to the matress i had troubles and struggles i felt the sadness now im grinnin and chilling as i slip to the blackness