i get my whole body drenched in the blood of a demon,
leave his ass like the exorcist, strung up and bleedin,
this young buck is screaming, cuz im a sole man of god,
if my rhymes were human,
they would look like that dude from the commercial of BOD,
get the controversial rod, beat up by the ...

your girl calls me sweetie cuz im the afternoon delight,
im a dog that bites, so get ready to fight,
might more powerful than the gods insight,
what a frivolous night, drink a shriverous sprite,
but what i write is basically the will to conquer,
something like the texas ranger so just call me walker.

getting blown like bubbles

This was mad long , but I liked this drop. I could picture almost every single thing you said. The flow would be perfect at times, and you had a lot of dope lines.


"Got the darkness to cloak me and my hazy expressions
Like for a minute I was doubting all my crazy obsessions"

One of my favorite ...

thanks man. much appreciated!

This was probably the best collab i have ever read on a forum... you guys are killers emcees.... stay on top and on the grind fellas!

thanks guys... trust me i will be working on it.
Much appreciated fellas

-- Wed Nov 16, 2011 4:53 pm --

this is a part 2 to what i just wrote. Feed back would be appreciated.

lets talk about complexity,
the bills, food and gas... is this a test for me,
im cracken up and breaking stuff,
im ...

whats up fellas, im new to the whole rap thing but been a poet for a while so tell me what you think.

cars in park, i bark, then tore open the door
2 guns in the back and my homie tore on the floor,
bitches talking bout him, and what they killed him for,
i pour out the coneyak and attack like i ...