I like the smooth sound the messages is good I would like to freestyle on it

What up I'm Jeyvon and here my verse
Sixteen years old living life wacthing it flow by/
Too much depression things in this world so I dont cry/
But I make the song do/Jay-z/They say Im crazy/ Cause I have big Dreams and Big Scheams/ Have tall money/Yao Ming/
And blow it on a tat on the face of ice ...