Aight...

6 Bars....House Rules...Just Dropped In...Gotta Shortty Over...

lol

Ayo..

Lets Do a Forum Rules...6 Bars Battle

LOL

I enjoyed this yo....lmao..I'm a Asian Fan Allll The Way kid and My Asian Cinema with Martial Arts and Drama piles up to be over 1400 titles...so with that being said...NICE work kid..nice story...you gave me a vision even though at times you through a Paradox that had nothing to do with that ...

Yeh the Flow was a like a South type flow but you have some nice lyrics..

and it was a Catchy flow at that don't get me wrong...
It was cool easily to read into it as well...The Entire Verse was smooth kid..Keep it up

Actually I think it was more Poetic than a Lyrical Verse..

Its more Spoken Word at that...If that's where you were going?..Then this is pretty good..
If this is a song then it's realllly Choppy...Gotta re-write it maybe and not repeat most of your lines..if its a a verse to a song...

Aight...

I think it was aight...

The Flow was Aight..it was a Battle type Flow..if you are writing why come off with a battle type flow?...Change it up..
the Multi-s aren't needed repeatedly...
You had a little structure like e2dap Stated...then you TeREct Syndrome Us with Fuck Ya Sister blah blah to just ...

Scarf Scum Swift...Spit!!

Its Sad When it comes to Battles..Cats Avoid Ya-Look At ya Record//
Ya Just Got Back From Iraq? But Ya Still A LOST Veteran//
Ya Gots Taste-So I Credit Ya...Thu Out Classed As An Alien-I'm The Real Predator//
Somebody Thu-Hem Eraser-mate Pens For the 2 Wins..Ya ...

Oooh...I'm sorry Yo...I posted up..Toked Up!! and Been Making Movies and Shit on my Side Hustle..lol..

Then I Been Getting At K. Panda With the Greets and all...Maaad Thanks Kid..

But Yo..Aight..

Absurd Words-Rehearsed Writtens..The Verbz he Prob-ly Spitten//
I'd Rather Listen, To Proverbs In ...

Sorry K...I'm trying to push a huge order for tonight....

but yeh getting ready to go to school for Studio Engineer and No I'm no longer active...lol...Whew...Out since 30 DEC 1998...

Last Stationed in VA Beach on Damneck Base...afer leaving USS Trenton in Norfolk...

aight...mOs Def...thanks...I'm already enjoying it...Love to see the Fire Kid to battle and just create music...Love it...

Aight Thanks Yo..

sounds like a man with Military Background..lol..or knowledge..

I appreciate it...

LOL

Nah I know...I was just Grabbing the Battle..I set up the Battle in the Text Battles already...

Forum Rules

5 Bars....

Forum Rules...

8 Bars

Nah Not to much kid..

Just a little much for readers on a battle...

8 to 10 bars tops usually on a battle verse and 10 is considered a lot to some viewers..

So 8 is cool Lets do this...go ahead and set it up if you haven't already....

Peace