I'm fully rested now, so why do I lay under unsteady grounds,
The weight of the world above me as the earth presses down,

good shit man, flowed nicely, i was feelin it the whole time. good shit

fall twice, mans nice with the verbal device
stand up, stand tough with a surgical slice
guys' rough, lacks love, got his heart in a hiest
world hiest, of men and mice, none will suffice
rights get surpassed when he clutches the mic
transcends space and time, with snake eyes that rollin like dice
a ...

Nice man, really touching and well written. I can realte to this having my mom go through a similar experience. Big ups and keep writing pablito

Don’t get too close to me youll see my imperfections
Cuase im often flaunting the things that most need correction
Im no better than the next man
I often think that im less than
Letting people walk all over me like I was Stetsons
An Often fuming, talking human seems yall were just xmen
nothing more ...

yeah this was meant as more of a poetic verse. youll see alot of my stuff is written in this sort of way. I dont really follow to many rhyme schemes and patterns. I just let an instrumental speak, and interpret what i hear. Thanks for the feedback though. Much appreciated

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Does he know better
Knows enough, yet wont make himself better
Knowingly inflicting pain beneath his sweater
Beneath the epidermis
Lies hurt and eyes open wide
Look inside, cant find cause the hurt disguised
Death flirts, wise words
Spoken to him
A stubborn mind that wont listn to em
Little devil in ...