no particular genre. just listening to the blues alot lately

really like the brainstorm body plays anchor line. i lost the flow a few times on the first read but the parts that i caught had a really smooth flow. my only issue was that content quality is not consistent some parts are proper dope where as some feel a little filler. but overall i think the verse ...

upside down might change the scene,
but days they scream ignorance reigns supreme
makes my brain a fiend for all these brainless schemes
while they prepare for me small grave so deep
with shovels made out of stainless steel
holy water silver bullets try to take their team
they unaware it seems that ...

let me know what you think.
http://soundcloud.com/one-thing-considered/track-1

apart from maybe using more words than needed this was a very good drop. the flow was a little here and there but i am assuming you can make up for that while delivering the verse.i know i am relatively new to this so i shouldnt be handing out advice. what was the topic?

just signed up. let me know what you think.

a beat and a rhyme,for defeating the kind,of people who find, somekind of peace of mind, by taking a piece of mind, i wait and i piece i find, that the puzzle was fun but doesnt really make sense, double trouble just run and take precautionary steps, to ...