http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/hoping-for-change-vt24897.html#p186295 http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/like-a-monster-vt24814.html#p186294 http://www.reverbnation.com/artist/song_details/11203092 ^Scroll down on link for lyrics mics better then it sounds, just got to learn to mix and shit proper...

nice drop here, flow was pretty legit, nice multies aswell, made me enjoy the lyrics etc, fairly decent prsense and delivery, maybe could of been slightly better in certain point, but no one bro. digging it.

idk what to say, it was different, thought the lyrics was weak, lyrically not strong, lacking multis metas etc, like it was kool for what it was, but thats about it in my opinion, keep dropping, dont get discouraged. no hate.

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/feelin-it-vt23149.html#p185143 http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/this-feelin-vt24689.html#p185144 http://www.reverbnation.com/officialnell only song there, cause i only just recently got my equipment, its dope, im new to recording, still figuring out the software, c...

flow was on point tbh, great beat choose really like it, presence was fairly good, lyrics were kool, the odd line i didnt like, id of porbably left out and replaced, nice topic subject matter was consistent, nice one

beat was cool, liked the presence, maybe feel off in points, flow was decent, lyrics were okay, couple forcedl ines like the guy above said, verse 2 fell off compared to the first, that needs patching up if you do fix it, but not bad here

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=90BXxOYnoKA

part pre-written, majoirty freestyle, i just said whatever came to mind

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damn, that intro kicked in, in such a dope way, nice beat, real talk lyrics, i always liking something thats true, allows me to connect with the song, but the hook was the main thing in this track, good stuff, i liked it

beast beat, yeah the accent was heavy, but the lyrics were decent, the flow was consistent enough for my liking, maybe the pronouncing and delivery might improve your accent more and mixing more etc, but not bad

multis - jay
flow - mc
punches - jay
inner rhymes - neither
personal - neither

jay gets my vote

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The beat kicked in and got my attention straight away, the hook was pretty dope in my attention, the flow on the verses was good and the lyric were good aswell, def something im bump, cause you have that kind of style i enjoy listening to, and the quality was pretty legit, overall dope track, props,...

I liked the beat, not something i would personally spit on tohugh, the flow was consistent enough for my liking, the lyrics were decent, hook was quite interesting, to me, it feels like it shouldnt work, but it just does work, which i think is as good thing, overall, pretty decent track you got here