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by Ryth
Wed Jul 06, 2011 8:53 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Peace
Replies: 2
Views: 923

Re: Peace

seems like poetry more than a rap.. Well I've never been one much for writing the street/gangster style kind of hip hop, I'm much more inspired by poetry, but as for my own creations I'd still consider them rap since that's way they're intended to be performed. a nice introspective tho.. i liked it...
by Ryth
Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:37 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: HIPHOP VS RAP
Replies: 4
Views: 1297

Re: HIPHOP VS RAP

"i know y'all came for a beef but boys refuse why must we always anoint or choose if y'all must... before ya do i suggest that we go thru a few of the point of views though it seems lost to us when its tossed up.. what side of the coins the truth" - Love it. Other than that props on how yo...
by Ryth
Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:11 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Notions
Replies: 23
Views: 4843

Re: Notions

Like the other shit I've seen you drop this is pure dope man.
I really love your writing style. Your inspiring ;)
by Ryth
Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:47 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Guilty
Replies: 7
Views: 2272

Re: Guilty

Thanks for the critique and the props people, much appreciated!

I'll feel I have to spit it someday, so that I may get across how I thought it would be flowed!
by Ryth
Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:40 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Peace
Replies: 2
Views: 923

Peace

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/infinite-departure-vt23101.html http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/fathers-choice-vt22851.html Felt I wanted to get this out for some feedback. It's a short work but I feel I got across just what I wanted to say. No more words were needed. Serene the snow’s falling t...
by Ryth
Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:36 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: "Infinite Departure"
Replies: 2
Views: 1071

Re: "Infinite Departure"

Woah, shit man, really digging the flow on this one!
You ripped it, I'll be looking forward to reading more of your pieces.
Like the way you mixed relaxed, more everyday expressions with the use of a more profound language.

Props!
by Ryth
Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:27 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: A Fathers Choice.....
Replies: 23
Views: 5565

Re: A Fathers Choice.....

Don't know if I can offer any real feed on this, but I at least want to give you props! Keep it up man.
by Ryth
Sat May 28, 2011 11:19 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Guilty
Replies: 7
Views: 2272

Re: Guilty

Thank you man, glad to hear you liked it!

I've been writing poetry since I was a kid, so it's still deeply embeded in me. Only started writing rhymes last summer, so I'm still green.
by Ryth
Sat May 28, 2011 9:49 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Guilty
Replies: 7
Views: 2272

Guilty

Epitome of Beast Mind State Something I wrote a while ago, thought I might share it. His body turned like a clock, His mind warped by time, And though the fault surely was his He just kept passing it down the line, Blaming whomever had ever taken the time to get intertwined In his interest and then...
by Ryth
Sat May 28, 2011 9:30 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Epitome of Beast
Replies: 4
Views: 1354

Re: Epitome of Beast

Real nice flow you got there. I ain't one for slap talk and agressive rep, but I can't deny when it's done proper either. Keep it up!
by Ryth
Fri May 13, 2011 3:29 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Made It feat. Young Joe
Replies: 8
Views: 5448

Re: Made It feat. Young Joe

Ripped it man! I'll try and scrape some money together and buy that tape of yours sometime (y)

Really dig your flow by the way.
by Ryth
Fri May 06, 2011 1:22 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Mind State
Replies: 6
Views: 2517

Re: Mind State

Dope man, I love it.
The imagery is incredible - informative without being pretentious.
As for the vocabulary it's just the way I like it, and you keep a nice flow throughout the whole thing.
I can't see anything in this piece I would like to see changed.

Keep it up!
by Ryth
Thu May 05, 2011 11:32 pm
Forum: New Users
Topic: Introduce yourself
Replies: 198
Views: 69703

Re: Introduce yourself

Waddup people? Been writing poetry since I was a kid, and about a year ago I also started writing rhymes. Haven't had the chance to record anything worth recording yet, but I'm trying to shake something up. Peace. When I relapse, turn up the heat, With my saliva drippin' all over the beat, Snare tra...

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