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- Wed Jul 06, 2011 8:53 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Peace
- Replies: 2
- Views: 923
Re: Peace
seems like poetry more than a rap.. Well I've never been one much for writing the street/gangster style kind of hip hop, I'm much more inspired by poetry, but as for my own creations I'd still consider them rap since that's way they're intended to be performed. a nice introspective tho.. i liked it...
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:37 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: HIPHOP VS RAP
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1297
Re: HIPHOP VS RAP
"i know y'all came for a beef but boys refuse why must we always anoint or choose if y'all must... before ya do i suggest that we go thru a few of the point of views though it seems lost to us when its tossed up.. what side of the coins the truth" - Love it. Other than that props on how yo...
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:11 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Notions
- Replies: 23
- Views: 4843
Re: Notions
Like the other shit I've seen you drop this is pure dope man.
I really love your writing style. Your inspiring
I really love your writing style. Your inspiring
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:47 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Guilty
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2272
Re: Guilty
Thanks for the critique and the props people, much appreciated!
I'll feel I have to spit it someday, so that I may get across how I thought it would be flowed!
I'll feel I have to spit it someday, so that I may get across how I thought it would be flowed!
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:40 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Peace
- Replies: 2
- Views: 923
Peace
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/infinite-departure-vt23101.html http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/fathers-choice-vt22851.html Felt I wanted to get this out for some feedback. It's a short work but I feel I got across just what I wanted to say. No more words were needed. Serene the snow’s falling t...
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:36 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: "Infinite Departure"
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1071
Re: "Infinite Departure"
Woah, shit man, really digging the flow on this one!
You ripped it, I'll be looking forward to reading more of your pieces.
Like the way you mixed relaxed, more everyday expressions with the use of a more profound language.
Props!
You ripped it, I'll be looking forward to reading more of your pieces.
Like the way you mixed relaxed, more everyday expressions with the use of a more profound language.
Props!
- Mon Jul 04, 2011 7:27 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: A Fathers Choice.....
- Replies: 23
- Views: 5565
Re: A Fathers Choice.....
Don't know if I can offer any real feed on this, but I at least want to give you props! Keep it up man.
- Sat May 28, 2011 11:19 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Guilty
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2272
Re: Guilty
Thank you man, glad to hear you liked it!
I've been writing poetry since I was a kid, so it's still deeply embeded in me. Only started writing rhymes last summer, so I'm still green.
I've been writing poetry since I was a kid, so it's still deeply embeded in me. Only started writing rhymes last summer, so I'm still green.
- Sat May 28, 2011 9:49 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Guilty
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2272
Guilty
Epitome of Beast Mind State Something I wrote a while ago, thought I might share it. His body turned like a clock, His mind warped by time, And though the fault surely was his He just kept passing it down the line, Blaming whomever had ever taken the time to get intertwined In his interest and then...
- Sat May 28, 2011 9:30 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Epitome of Beast
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1354
Re: Epitome of Beast
Real nice flow you got there. I ain't one for slap talk and agressive rep, but I can't deny when it's done proper either. Keep it up!
- Fri May 13, 2011 3:29 pm
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: Made It feat. Young Joe
- Replies: 8
- Views: 5448
Re: Made It feat. Young Joe
Ripped it man! I'll try and scrape some money together and buy that tape of yours sometime (y)
Really dig your flow by the way.
Really dig your flow by the way.
- Fri May 06, 2011 1:22 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Mind State
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2517
Re: Mind State
Dope man, I love it.
The imagery is incredible - informative without being pretentious.
As for the vocabulary it's just the way I like it, and you keep a nice flow throughout the whole thing.
I can't see anything in this piece I would like to see changed.
Keep it up!
The imagery is incredible - informative without being pretentious.
As for the vocabulary it's just the way I like it, and you keep a nice flow throughout the whole thing.
I can't see anything in this piece I would like to see changed.
Keep it up!
- Thu May 05, 2011 11:32 pm
- Forum: New Users
- Topic: Introduce yourself
- Replies: 198
- Views: 69703
Re: Introduce yourself
Waddup people? Been writing poetry since I was a kid, and about a year ago I also started writing rhymes. Haven't had the chance to record anything worth recording yet, but I'm trying to shake something up. Peace. When I relapse, turn up the heat, With my saliva drippin' all over the beat, Snare tra...