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- Mon Nov 21, 2011 10:45 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Purple
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1169
Re: Purple
word up, thnx. and i ll keep that in mind for sure
- Sun Nov 20, 2011 1:05 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Whats inside
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1169
Re: Whats inside
I liked the consistancy of the peice. most people have a habbit of writing but slipping up through out the peice. this remained equal from begining to the end. the flow was smooth. I think the line that appealed most to me was "just another boss giver orders to his benefit scores ten ta six as ...
- Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:59 am
- Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
- Topic: WORD ASSOCIATION!
- Replies: 160
- Views: 88895
Re: WORD ASSOCIATION!
Venomous
- Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:47 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: yo
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1806
Re: yo
Yeah, I'm with Monu.
This structure your using is really rare, and not easy at all to pull off either. takes time to get used to. Its really original i loved that about this whole drop. i'm definitely gonna be looking for more of your peices man. keep at it
This structure your using is really rare, and not easy at all to pull off either. takes time to get used to. Its really original i loved that about this whole drop. i'm definitely gonna be looking for more of your peices man. keep at it
- Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:45 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Core Horror - MonuMental ft. Defiance
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5598
Re: Core Horror - MonuMental ft. Defiance
This was one of those "CLASSIC!" peices!
I loved the way everything was strung together, each line followed through the previous one PERFECTLY, flow was completely on point. and the imagery is what really hits heavy while reading this peice. Poetry at its finest
I loved the way everything was strung together, each line followed through the previous one PERFECTLY, flow was completely on point. and the imagery is what really hits heavy while reading this peice. Poetry at its finest
- Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:36 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Purple
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1169
Purple
Yo, Let the ryhthm kick, and quickly harden your wounds got lost in the fumes, there never was a god in the tomb i often resume, empty souls show no caution in wombs options assumed, lonely lives lost as the marksmen consumes inhale the toxins of doom, but my thoughts are gravely supreme rarely it s...
- Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:54 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Freeverse
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1630
Re: Freeverse
Good looks, haha yeah man i definetely see what ya'll are saying. Havent written in a minute yo real talk. but im about to get back into dropping here often man. good to be back
- Thu Nov 17, 2011 9:52 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Freeverse
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1630
Freeverse
Ready the weaponry, its vicious raps that we depicted I'll leave you off balance like your knee caps got twisted internal organs got shifted, then we'll be editing scriptures then you'll be held under water like developing pictures i show no fucking mercy, see im a competitive devil that would serve...
- Sun Aug 28, 2011 4:12 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Return
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1276
Re: The Return
yeah i see what you guys are saying haha. i rushed through this one its not at all like my other pieces, next piece will be better i guarantee it
- Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:31 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Life and Death
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2302
Re: Life and Death
one of those few peices that you DONT want to end at all man, i love the concept and over all delivery of the peice. very poetic and flow of it is amazing man!
- Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:29 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Pain
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1821
Re: The Pain
i love the way your peices string together so well man! comes off as SMOOTH poetry haha one of the first peices i have read during my return to the site. keep at it bro!
- Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:33 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Return
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1276
The Return
*clears throat* well... here goes Yo, i'm labeled insane, detained to an unstable terrain/ enable and drain, with enough rhymes to disable ya brain/ gracefull domain, grow horns with a angel detained/ painfull and plain, to face death with a hatefull remain/ collecting my staff, split the section th...
- Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:54 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Scriptures
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1805
Re: The Scriptures
Word up! Haha yeah I guess do have abut of that horrorcore type of style to my pieces. Ad again it's an honor to be compared to pun at all I appreciate it to the max
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- Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:03 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Scriptures
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1805
Re: The Scriptures
haha hey its an honor to be even slightly compared to pun man. Much appreciate it
- Mon Jul 11, 2011 10:28 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Scriptures
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1805
The Scriptures
now your bodies segmented, and inner organs extended/ these angels try to surround me but i hold em demented/ featured are dented, see your corpse is cemented/ i walk away with the prize and my force is contented/ elevated thunder sound, hold artillary when you come around/ resting with the burrows...