Sorry Im at work... hate my fuckin job...

They call you grim, well you know you reap what you sew;
"Sew" it "seems" you get killed wit this "thread" just for show;
Though im new to life here, I still dont fear a reaper;
Im dien to kill death, what a hell of a teaser…lol
You named yo self after ...

Check homey...

5 bars...thats it... cool... done in an hour...

Wat up.. Im new to this but Ill give it a go....

IM ME Freestyle... I goes in....lol Preciate any feedback

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Doin me mp3....
Listenin, Southern shit.... My type of flava...
Chorus is definately nice....but topic is played out as fuck...no diss...
The second verse and that singin shit needs to either be cut or autotuned or somthin...shit just dont fit... All together an average drop...

Remember to bring ...

Not even going to lie, delivery is dope man, nice display of intellect, and flow. You record in a pro studio? Quality is dope, rhyme schemes are dope man. Not really my cup of tea, but I know a lot of people who would feel this. Where is the chorus? Seems like a quick drop, or a snippet. Wait, is ...

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK...

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K7q36PUMkwI[/video]

Listenin....
OK...story teller....flow is nice... beat is dreary.. matches the topic... love it... lyrics nice....thats you ope a track homey....

2nd verse... Flow is different... switches from slow to quick multis... thats talent... lyrics nice... but the quick to slow got yo rhymes not hittin in ...

Listenin...
OK... classick fuckin beat...
OK... multis killen 'em... ok... we got a spitter...
Light skin aint in nigga...
"Go to town on occasion to stay a city slicker"
nice...
CHORUS is real... feelin it...

Stand up guy..thoughts tell me to sit down...
love it....

All around nice... I dont ...

Listenin....
Shit comes in nasty.... You better kill it....

Rose in the concrete blown by the wind....
Nice...
Shit is flowin... lyrics good... your voice is different as fuck...no diss..lol

Shit was decent... I think the beat saved you...naw... just fuckin wit ya... alotta cats woulda fucked ...

Flow is iffy homey... Lyrics aint bad but they aint great either... I'd give it a 6/10... And thats just cuz i've heard worse...

Keep spittin though... Chorus unique... Flowed...

What up...

Check out my flow real quick:

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K7q36PUMkwI[/video]

Found out about the site just by searchin on Google...

Out the same town as T PAIN no comparison... Just feel my shit... Im a fan first... Love this rap shit... Im commin for niggas spots...lol ...