I hope you don't think your ur enlightened because you got some silly ass vocab/I'll kill your rap career and hand you the toe tag/Murdered more than one hope i don't get locked in hell for this/ But when i crush mics the whole communities dropping in celsius!

Dope! Good read!

NIIIIICE DROP !

What happened to hip hop?

its like i'm trapped in the system/

with no hope just wishes/

trying to figure out what part of the game i been missing/

i lost love for hip hop, that day i cried/ I tried to stop it, but i watched the game commit suicide/

we sold our souls for watches and rides/the ...

I used to be full of passion/ When i started doin this rap shit/
Now all my people wanna know what happend/ Its tragic/
You had so much talent/ We thought you would make it/
I couldn't handle all the fake shit/ Ya'll can take it/
i lost my love for this game/ I'm going insane/
All these words in my ...

i'm working on a part 2 but i'm thinking of a larger scale Battle.

Damn Bro i like your style Nice up man

Pest wrote:ehh...
4/10

Get some rhyme scheme in it, some creativity, some iltellegence, and non played lines its be better

keep workin bro

-- Wed Apr 06, 2011 12:15 pm --

Pest wrote:ehh...
4/10

Get some rhyme scheme in it, some creativity, some iltellegence, and non played lines its be better

keep workin bro

Man I need you to hit me up i wanna do a song together man, what chu think?

And takin that skank/Leanin off drank/
Introduce her to rape/ and send you the video tape/
No escape/ Showing you bitch niggas whats in the hearts of men/
its the sounds of revenge/ spewin hate through my pen/ you can't win/
when and i'm finished/ your souls diminished/and you'll never be seen again!

Well actually this was the start of the end of my faith in man and god bro

And i seen less bullshit from a cow with diarrhea/
Should've never fucked your girl bitch gave me Gonorrhea/
When i see her its murda and i hope that you watching/
Blow the front of her head out, there goes the open coffin/
Closed Casket for the bastards that over step they line/

Been there before bro... for real

Fuck the Industry, HOUSE NIGGAS

Nice drop man