Yo this is nice man, the beat is veryyyy smooth good bars too

Dope shit homie, Im liking the flow!!!

Nice to know that I've helped ya overlook the whole accent thing...It must seem kinda alien cause I guess you guys dont really hear many English MC's. Glad you guys are feeling it anyway!
Oh and littlefranky, I've got a couple tracks on my youtube channel!
http://www.youtube.com/HazzaHipHop
Thanks ...

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This isnt off the dome freestyle, just me reciting a written so dont take it as me claiming something I'm not.

But yeah, feedback ...

I love your laid back style and I think the hook works really well with your singing, it's really catchy. The beat matches your flow/style perfectly and sounds really unique to me along with the spoken word parts, they are dope. Nice piece of art.

This is a cool track, I like the dark feel to the beat and I think you guys did it justice. Solid flows and good delivery!

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So yeah, I'm from England, Nottingham & this is a tune I wrote about a conversation with the grim reaper...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6pXaHecAbRI

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Smooth choice of beat, nice flowing over it too homie! respect

Nice vid dawg, the flows pretty nice!

Drop me some constructive criticism on my first tune 'The Taster'
Peace!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5sOYIEng2E

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Nice work man, got some cool punchlines in there and I cant knock the flow!

Good shit brah, I liked the beat and you kept it real with the lyrics..Keep it up!

<r>Check out this verse, I did it a while ago but its just showing a bit of a versatile flow compared to my first tune!<br/>
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