my 5th formal beat

http://www.reverbnation.com/artist/song ... s/11732917

niice. the beginning reminded me of Ratatat. the melody was nice. i enjoyed listening to it !

the beat- [video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XR4GjQzVc9A&[/video]


verse 1
they say Indian rapper, stick to Indian topics,
makin’ a song on streets is unreal- flop shit
or flossin’ daddy money, i wont, i promise
i wont show off my riches, unless I fill my pockets
and i live uptown, im not being ...

niice i liked it. at a few places i think you could have used internals to make it stronger.
this should've gone with a hott beat.

and i loved the

p.s i'm Wonder Woman

in the end xD

i dont know how i came with that name
im more of a writer, but i've tried to create something

verse starts at 00:14
hook at 1:18
verse 2 starts at 1:22
next hook+ outro at 2:16

Prod. by S. Trizz.

Starin at her empty glass of milk, "the little mermaid" shes readin
Lying on her crumpled quilt, but her fear aint receeding
Her mother's husband walks in, pants down, gets his "job" done
She bears it all in silence, her hopes have extincted undone.
"good night"
No reply. tears on her cheek gleam ...

alright. Im in.

alright Pest. Im cool with this one

i dont follow marshall law -_-

im down for a topical.

well, my intution said a hacker didnt attack this site

i wanted to be a vet- an animal doc as a 7 yr old. A researcher when i was 12. i wanted to be a c.e.o of a big company 3 yrs ago. Now, i've decided to be an audio engineer/ record producer.
I selected those jobs only coz of the money in em. Passion...is important.. It seems to come after cash ...

yo topical ?

Immensely inspired by the great indian intellect
The uptown brown-town, Mumbai, where i was bred
Grew up, big city, big booties, money, swag,
Trizz in real life, marie antoinette will say 'damn...'
Enough said,
i'd hook you up with chains and hot hooks
count the number of rappers KILLed by this ...

wow, nice. good topic, good beat fine flow. i enjoyed listening to it