This was so suppose ta get better.. Never
Whenever I think its gone ta shit..
It just Keeps dropping no matter how gone I git

^^^ nice


my High is breached since you want to argue till my defeat
In ya eyes it speaks..you switch up when i'm Inside n beat
Like i'm that guy ta keep..I should just Try ...

I'm about ta grind like a drought is fine
think i'm at my best while I reroute my prime
my bright thoughts are out and about like shyne
while some are good without a voice like a mouthless mime

^^^ wow i loved this!

They still do sniff tests cause cats doubt the lines
Writing timeless raps,while ...

thank u for ur feedback i loved how u broke it down the way u did and yes i did mean show and soap as soap operas and yes i am a girl lolol

wow very impressive i had read this b4 and loved it i just couldnt leave u feed, see this is how i want to write!!! but i have a long way to go, u r def a great writer loved it!

ty 4 ur feed i will keep that in mind

wow i loved it!!! the beat, flow lyrics really good and i always ask for written lyrics but there was no need for that with this, great!!!

ha very nice for a keystyle/ freestyle w/e i liked it and so true! nice!

The potency of this lifestyle is hard to understand I'm from another land
where rap produces beats, and beats produce the heart thats under man

^^^^ i loved this gave me chills lol

turn those coals into di-monds, thats when he told me to get my shine on..

^^^ wow

ever since then I been flyer ...

nice topic loved it,


Disappeared.. they're like wheres whats his Name I wonder
I'm Thinking a little different now.. Blame the hunger
Sedated..chilling.. its Pain I'm Under
Could teach you how to get in good shape,
Like I'm Training runners

^^^ loved this

In deep thought when It rains and ...

"This was the moment when rapping became my saviour
When I was so fond of rhyming with a pen and a paper
Got me flowing like a water, then vanished like vapour
And thats when I came from success, to a failure"

^ nice opening i liked it

"And thats when I came from success, to a failure
It all ...

wow this was very impressive, loved every single line!!! i wont bother quoting bcuz id quote it all this is def something i want to read again lol really great one of the best i've read, in my opinion atually something with a deep meaning behind it and u got ur message across great! just very ...

“Guided through the light transaction follow through like peril
death to life, life to death the body carries gold like a Pharoah
if ever the flip sides on my, I hold their future quite like the tarot
swing with might, take flight to the heavens ask God for new apparel”

^^^ loved how u started this ...

tho the quality is a lil rusty some static but very good for being at home, its good i like ur voice sounds different from other rappers nice flow i just wish u would have added lyrics to read along as i listen good job def got talent!

wow this gave me chills very emotional and unique!

"he feels weak and unable, to keep his charade face up
got a girlfriend once but they were bound to break up
cuz he screams and breaks stuff, as his kids cry to sleep
he acts violently, but he too cries inside silent-ly "

^^^ very nice

"he feels ...

loved how u started this it made me curious to know who u were referring 2 and loved how it turns out it was u......

"Now who’s this story’s about?…well, It’s actually me
The protagonist…with raps I spit so drastic-a-ly
Never been afraid to fly, so I captured a breeze
While ya’ll “pussies” don’t ...