NEED HELP!!!

not bad man..nice hook lol

first guy kinda sounds like baby bash.. i dont know what else to say really its good enough to be mainstream on the radio but i think it still needs more quotables

What I spit is INTELLECTUAL, cadaver pouches when I INTERCEPT A FOOL
But Only time he get bodies bagged is when he MOLESTS A TESTICLE...
He ACCEPTS ITS SEXUAL, he couldn't be close to making good shit if his RECTUM DROOLS EXTRA STOOL

gross lol i said ew outloud decent multis kinda off but i can ...

keyed up on the shoutbox!


my ears are ringing, in a silent room,
no one else can hear it, these violent booms
my mind is zoomed, in a timeless tomb,
a production of destruction ripping from inside its womb..
where in which you left is now its birth place,
people laught at the mistakes that i ...

fuck this my collabs were the best hahaaha

I.L. Presents late niggas that are scared to drop

all the words said in his own speech, are always used, misled by his own needs

best line in the entire piece... good shit not as moving as nervousness but still good

wow. This is well written my friend

you have improved alot... good read

dope.

theres no due date?

-- Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:27 pm --

theres no due date?

dropped my verse in as well...waiting on one guy now...

my bad!!! lol ill post something tonight around midnight pst cuz im stuck at work..ill seee if i can get something in sooner thanks.. me and kuhler should post around the same time im guessing so its evened out

Good shit skep... props

i checked in with this battle as soon as it was posted.. check the shoutbox.

so ill be posting a verse by tomorrow

check