thanks for the feedback man

-- Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:37 pm --

one more bump

thanks man

newest track that's been completed

http://snd.sc/lUerXq

RIP Ryan Dunn

feedback left for a few people

i can fuck with this

i didn't like the way you ended it though, just sounded like you gave up kinda

i guess that's the old text-battler in me, gotta have a dope closer haha

good shit though

i'm not really feeling the mix on this

you're too loud most of the time, then sometimes your vocals dip down behind the beat

i didn't like the ad-libs either

fix that stuff and it's pretty dope

thanks for the feed guys

working on a new project, Just Premiered Volume 2, where i rap on Just Blaze / DJ Premier beats

here's the first track i recorded for it

http://snd.sc/liQlIp

left feed for a few people, couldn't hear a lot of peoples' tracks though

i've got nothing bad to say about the verses

i wasn't feeling the hook though

it was cool

i feel like it'd of been better if you'd have done more than one track, if you didn't

it sounds like you're rushing to finish some of your words

that's the only bad thing i have to say about your part

thank you very much sir

i'll put up a more 'emcee' like track later tonight haha

thank you for the listen sir

thanks for the feedback and the comparison to Atmosphere haha

'dope like i hit rocks'

i didn't like the intro though, shit confused me at first

easily my most personal track yet

http://soundcloud.com/the-hand-of-god/12-daniel-aliff-emotionless

started writing it in '05 right after my father died to The LOX - Training Day, gave it up for a while, then downloaded some Danger Mouse beats in like '07 and found this one, the verse i'd written ...

shit was dope, beat fit the lyrics perfectly

a lot of deep shit in there

dudes don't understand that you can say some profound shit without it being complicated

'being cool is your state of mind/ wearing chains like your a slave to rhyme'

i'm not a fan of when dudes rap in foreign languages ...