I shrug my shoulders as I look across the world
At these african children and little foster girls
I don't give a fuck and I like to sport uggs
So meet me outside over by the golf club
Let's have a cup of coffee, here I brought mugs
Let's go to the beach, let's show the resort love
I'm looking at the ...

Thank you, I appreciate it bruh.

TF was that about? Anyways thanks for the feed.

Throughout my porous experience, I have tried to adorn holes
A guy that happens to be sublime with a torn soul, born slow
Blind with a mind like a longbow, sharp in the sky like a thorn thrown
Piercing any guy in my war zone, who pries in my mind's stronghold
Mind your own, I'll die trying to hold ...

I can relate dude. Honestly, I head to read your work twice because I couldn't interpret it at first, but now that I know I think it's awesome. We can all make a change, but it starts with ourselves and we should all start to become aware of the world around us. It isn't all peaches and cream, I ...

I've never experienced love, but I love how you explained everything you said. It sounded like you were reading the poem in my head lol. Great detail, great poetry. Keep it up!

My formation is formally forsaken
An error in my syntax caused me to walk penguin
And gorge hatred in you because I was born faithless
But that's an aspersion I'm in the world lost waiting
It's hard to be a butterfly and sting like a bee
When these butterflies in my stomach keep winging in me ...

Haz this was an awesome piece, I'll make sure to read your stuff a lot more often man. Good flow, great multi's, and just an all around great written. Keep writing yo.

Your a BEAST! Enough said. I enjoyed it, the dashes in between the words were fucking me up while I read it though. Nonetheless you killed it.

Life is just a roundabout
You'll be surprised when you find it out
Free your mind, why hide the doubt
So many assholes who ain't mature
So I treat them like the seafloor
Then wait until the anchor falls
I can't walk because my ankle's sore
I'm so injured from experience
That I ain't even made for ...

Very dope and dark story, chronological and all. The just wish the last part could've been longer but that's all. Good shit.

I loved the your multi game man, the message was dope. Keep exposing the fake shit and do your thing. My only problem was that there were a few lines with flows I couldn't catch on to, but other than that it was great! Keep working!

My inner arduous heart's chewing me apart
Argumentative arts spar armed in the marsh
Start carving the carcass of my ardor larger
Passion partners split apart portioning things
That I love is a must but I just can't lust once
With a multi-fascination I hate this feeling now
He'll be out soon to oust ...

Pretty nice and well explained, I liked it a lot your a dope lyricist. Keep that shit up!

Hell yeah your definitely inspired by Cassidy, regardless of what though that shit was dope bruh I can't wait to read more shit from you. Keep posting!