Fasho brotha, my next post will be something slower that I'm trying to be more serious with

Thanks for the feedback, it wasn't intended to be groundbreaking or anything like that, just something that came off the top. Again, appreciate the feedback

Thanks bro, coulda made it a little longer, just throwing something up real quick to get myself out there

Here's my first post http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/gettin-better-vt20633.html#p163346 and here's number 2 http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/worst-comes-worst-vt20627.html#p163348 Alright, here goes... I step out the whip, laced to the tip/ Got a fresh white tee and some coke white kicks/ Crisp n...

What up, used to be pretty active on a forum way back, can't even remember the name it was so long ago, but just decided it was time to give it a shot again. From Portland, OR, reppin' the 503 and excited to be back around some real emcees.

Flowed pretty well man, definitely worth the read, but it was a little simple, and that Captain Kirk line left me confused.

Not bad, a little simple but not bad, try out some multi's and work on the flow a bit