Good stuff man but it did sound a little mimickey if thats a word. Good drop nonetheless.

Shit was funny dude. I like the verses but the chorus didn't do it for me. It was'nt catchy to me. Other than that the rhymes were solid snake dude.

I was bobbing my head on this one. Not to take away from the lyrics but if you can just listen to a song and not really listen to the words the first time just how the emcee is flowing to it and I think you did your job. When the beat started I looked off into nothing and just drifted somewhere in ...

Shit was sick dude, especially the second verse. You really rode the beat on the second one I felt like I was listening to Common or Luda for a second. I felt like you should have played the chorus one more time and then went out. That's just my opinion. It's your artwork at the end of the day. But ...

Hey everyone is different guys and this one was an experiment that came out how it came out. It's really about capturing a concept I had and it turned out different than I thought it would but it was fun to do though.

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And hey even if you didn't like it I appreciate ...

I appreciate it man. That shit about selling it so the deaf can hear is fuckin' hilarious dude. I'm gonna steak that line in the next track. Seriously man thanks for the feed though.

I like it. Hip-Hop is like your bitch and shit. I would fuck Hip-Hop too. That's how sexy it is. Mmmmmmmmmm......Okay yeah, the song was fuckin awesome and the verses are relevant to the hook which was awesome. It was clear but you should have gone different levels and hit diffent parts harder and ...

Thanks for the feed man. Like I said this one was just fun to do and it was just some real quick freestyle and I just wanted to see how people would respond to it cause it is a little crazy but I'm hoping this is a stepping stone to something unique and maybe a branching out from traditional hip-hop ...

True shit man. That's why I signed up cause I thought whether I was ready for my shit to be heard or not that I would perfect my craft by feedback from the hip-hop masses. We need to get people going dude.

Awesome shit dude. Has a DMX style to the flow. Same here with the emotion aspect of the lyrics you spit. A track should be like a film. You need those ups and downs that keep people anticipating what's gonna happen next. The voict doubling also, I thought, Should have been saved for the chorus only ...

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This something silly as hell just playing around with creating an alter ego. It was a fun track to do. Just take it with a grain of salt.

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There ain't no school like the old school. That's what I was feeling on this one. You took me back to the hip-hop days of yore and I felt the wind comin in my window cause this is a chill, cruisin down the boulevard track. Nice work, keep it up dude.

Shit was sick with it man. U should have ur record spinnin in the club dude.

I feel like your rhymes are real slick but they aren't flowing with the beat like they should. You need to become a unity with that shit. You and the beat are one entity. Much respect to you though. I like the lyrics but the timing was a bit off.

It has masssive power and emotion but I was distracted by the fact that the drums never came in. It was a noble venture with just the strings and such but the drums would have given the listener a rhythm to grab. It would have took your lyrics to another level.