my kick back lyrically
causes violent riff raff
I'm rhyming while eating kit kats
putting emcees underground
six feet deep
can you dig that?
all these kids claiming their spits fat
it's like excess blubber coming out of flaps
ayo just shut the fuck up
no one wanna join ya gay chit chat
knowcon
I'll ...

I heat seek with precision
breathe deep,spit venom to defeat the opposition
heavy mental,write masterpiece upon leafs
trained rugged to kill in impossible conditions
tongue and cheek,swallow my pride with no chaser
implode the earth,ashes and sediments,glowing vapors
abstract art pumping illness to ...

you certainly mix the modern rap lingo with awsome words placement and vocab.i like your imagery and over all abstract style that mixes poetry with modern rap.stay up bro.

I'm sure your audio is a perfect as this.word placement,mutlis and just raw lyrical content make this drop
one of the best written pieces on this site.stay up dunn.

I pound hammers on enemies and inflict calamity
mass murdering emcee with suicidal insanity
turn ya clavicle into baseball bat
one by one beat your rappin groupie familly
I'm bent on violence and commence in fatalities
you couldent be sick even if your illest rhymes got a cold
drill a thick metal ...

freestyles dipped in molten lava then thrown like a javalin
melanin' get blown in fragments of blown
so what's happenin
fuck the gun clappin
I'm fittin to give enemies coloumbian bow ties
quit your riff raffin
you bitch ass,no good spits of rappin
I punch a thousand pounds of spite to these faggots ...

when I get finished killing every wack person on earth//
i'll be relieved of this lingering curse//
using pictures of lil wayne for target practice//
reelling in them herbs//
with pristine lines//
unorthodox rhymes slaughter your blatent syntax errors//
shatter your spleen with twin nines//
mind ...

lyrically the presence emcees fear
you cant endure the pressure i put to your cranial cavity
put your body for wholesale up in them sears
actually
i manufacture words so precise
splice up ya gene structure so you share dna with ed gein
you cant handle the capacity
dismantle wack emcees with the ...

your raw with the drop and simplistic which is not bad.i thought i caught some multi's in there which is cool.

enjoyed this piece very much.
stay up.
-knowconscience

like clogged toilets in a mental asylum,shit is crazy
i thought the line was cool but simple.

you have a good flow and your use of imagery is pretty ill.
i do feel some lines did not connect togther well though.
but hey... we all have difrrent styles so just stay up and keep droppin.

great vocab and word usage in your peace.ill instrumental chosen too..i was just peepin that beat a few days ago.ayo stay up kid i enjoy what you have to offer.great imagery.peace

this thread hasent had much buzz.but f it...im knowconscience and been in the hip hop forum game since 2002.very rusty and lookin to sharpen the blade a bit.