I can tell that your angry, by the puffs and the moans/
How many signs must i give until you leave me alone//

You got me bundled up smothered shut, when do i breathe?/
Its almost like your insults, put my mind at ease//

How long will you poor till i got a half cup/
As much as you cut me down, its ...

alright... 1-0... uppin for votes.

Best Bars: Ol Boy Slim: apparently you put a quarter in a girls cunt to get her-`started
that's obviously fake coz when U saw my sperm-`on sale you-`bought-it ..//..
Da HaZarD: Ayo.. This Kids a Joke i Sit & Laugh, if There Were Condoms Named Afta Him i Wouldnt Git His Raps
They Quick To Get Rip ...

Best Lines From The Battlers

Rh1no: you fuckin wit the devil son i abuse angels, wont think twice bout leavin you mangled
on a roof holdin feet while you dangle, spittin flawless lines against your obtuse angles

Fin-S: Rhino U Think Ure a Vet ? C'mom They Would Neva Say U2 Like They Cited Their ...

thanks for the battle... may the better man win... off to the votes.

Don't Lie kid you really do need practice/
Your "dope-lines" are passed on even by binging crack-heads//

What you do to notebooks... yea kid it's Tragic/
I'll reek havoc, and dispel your magic//

Yea... there all sure you'll have-this, "battle in the bag" but only when I Smash-his/
Dome into two ...

I hear noises...
Background, voices of pressed luck.
Offering opinions shoved down throats...
Now about to burst...
Packed with gunpowder, Protect that lump in your throat...
Or walk into morning meeting...
"shoot" for the stars, and speak... speak.
Your mind, voice yourself...
Cause I ...

thanks for the honest feed back... i will drop more.

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i dropped a written, two different styles i use alot... read and tell me what ya think...

Rappers now a days, pist-this-kid, to slittin-wrists, fists-get, forced to-ribs, of-course, this morbid-kid, will store-a-hit, making storms-of-shit, hit, like there aint no "fans" near to witness-it. already clear of witnesses, shots-from-sniper-rifles, got-the-hyped-up-rivals, lost-like-forgotten ...

the first half was a death~wish, the second half was granted, don't take if for granid, this kid'll get~pissed, and pass a fist, through ya face to the granite, as i lace my shoes, and wreak havoc, to create news is my weekly habbit, tweek a attict, teach him to speak with madness, kill in an ...

im still to new... it won't let me, if you want to set it up i will check in and drop... let me know

vote goes to complex...

Multies.
flow.
rhyme schemes.
nice use of the english language...

all there.

thanks for the welcome... i already enjoy this site.