This is exciting

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This is nice dude


I'm too ill to be underrated but dumb down for the sake of gettin' read
like a young blood, so I break MC rhymes down and segment the rest
shoot the breeze with a million flows but keep shootin' blanks


I feel the same way.

Keep it up man, who cares what others have to say ...

I'm sticking to what I know by painting a vision with inscriptions in the midst of these prose,
or just give em what I'm livin and expose it through my soul, the heart of man in this age have become filled with rage
and like a rib cage that froze.. inside what's pumpin is cold, if you could grasp ...

Hey thanks guys. Qwart you're right, I get real focused on my lyrics for a short period of time and then I get distracted. I don't like going back to old pieces because I don't feel the same sense of emotion that I had at the time of writing it, which to me kind of changes the overall feeling of it ...

Is that Drake?

...just sayin

Ay thanks murk. This came straight from my note pad so I don't really worry about line structure in there. But yeah, for the purpose of this board, next time I'll shape it up a little.

The sun starts to peek above the mountains in the distance/
Far beyond the high rising towers and places of business/
I try to take in the scene with a sigh as I breath/
As if I can't comprehend what my eyes are showing me/
I'm frustrated.. holding this lock with no key/
While I think at the same ...

Thanks guys

Thank you complexity, nice avatar btw. It's going good. The weathers starting to cool off here in AZ. That's always a positive thing. Anyways, I'm glad to be here. I'm passionate about lyricism. Writing takes up most of my time so I hope to get involved with some stuff in here.

How you doing ...