okay bud, ill post it on here once im finished :)h

cheers mate
do you think i should carry on writin this?

yeah its tj, spittin about those who have to fight in doubles,
coz they cant fight for themself, they cant handle their own troubles,
i make you feel like your facin suttin thats real collosal,
leave ya dead, in the end, youll get digged up like a fossil,
without cheats, i drop beats, down the ...

lmao, okay, let me know what you think

yeah :L thats true,
i mean they're all basically the same,
ill post what i wrote so far of that track on here if you want?
but i dunno if i wanna carry on writin it still

cheers mate
i mean, i wrote one rap that used good rhymes instead of basic ones like this, but my mate was like
"nah you cant, only black people use big words as the rhymes"
so i never bothered carryin on writin it

cheers everyone well im hopin i'll get better,
but gotta start somewhere ey?
and nah, im not aussie, im from landannn! (london) :L

thanks mate well in my signature, theres a link called Love Letter Part 3, take a listen and see what you think

how can i live without your love?
when your the one that makes me rise above,
you make me happy everyday,
with you in my mind, thats where i wanna stay,
coz we've been so close for so long,
you got me writin bare love songs,
i thought you was juss stringin me along,
but now ive realised i was wrong ...

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let me know what you think. ive only been spittin for 3 months and these are probably my best tracks

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Sarcastic Kid

hey, ive been looking everywhere for the instrumental but cant find it anywhere,theres loads of versions of the real song and ive made a track but i need this beat to spit the track to, its called:
Bad Bad Man - John Cena & Tha Trademarc ft. Bumpy Knuckles
its off John Cena's album: You Can't See Me ...