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Conflicts plague me like a Sierra Leone diamond, Always swimming upstream like a spawning salmon. But look into a diamond’s soul And see a dying man’s soul. It feels like that’s all they rap for, a diamond piece. At the club, I spied a dime piece With an ass that was redic, So I hit it twice, redick...

My pen’s the needle, the paper’s the vial What I’ve got to say makes people tune their dials. Each verse I bleed out is a lil part of me Something I leak out for you and the world to see. I hear what’s getting air play, it’s like they trying to change the game And it feel like the radio ain’t the sa...

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What do you mean by expanding? Are you talking about the metaphors or what?

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Unemployment’s on the rise Everyone’s hoping for a savior, eyes to the skies But it’s like mirror, it reflects their eyes Some understand, others give up Return to their couch, wait for others to pick them up Never understanding, they’re their own catalyst They don’t put in work, hands uncaloused Ex...

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Home is where the heart is But home is my darkness. On my way there I remember- Why I left here, My burden I could no longer bear. They said lean on me But instead I weaned off thee. Uprooting myself from what I knew, Thinking I could start anew But what I did was I blew Away the morals I used to ob...