Very nice. Has a smooth rhyme scheme.

Sick flow, tells a cool story. Reminiscent of Swollen Members, keep up the good work.

It is intended as spoken word BTW.

The environment is my main concern
While the government wants to slash and burn
Anyone but the green party's efforts I spurn
What liberal minded sheep cares about a tree
Only thing they plant is the HST
So when left wing yuppies rant about clear cutting
Students are paid to replant, it's mind ...

Checkmate - Cypress Hill

I get paranoid like that when I'm really baked, and every food is the damn best.

I'm here to crash the party like a drunk in a car
I'll raise the bar, and maybe even take it too far
I ain't shitting, Sherlock, have a puff of this tar
Spitting and coughing flow more sick than SARS

Hey guys, I'm new here, and new to writing raps
I've got one down on paper and one in the making.
I ...