Yeah i couldve jumped deeper in but i just wrote a page about some of the hip hop times i remember best
And i didnt forger about Big L just forgot to put him in this Piece Maybe im do a Part 2

As Im Online right now im the only real user on the other registered members are goggle and yahoo bots. I Know cuz its blasted on there name, i looked at recent users online saw a few other bots n a spider
why r these bots obviously being allowed to be members
Is it a money issue? becuz that i ...

I Picked this up 2 weeks ago
For those that dont know the Gospel Of Hip Hop Is a Book written by KRS One over a 14 year Period released sometime in 09. its about 800 pages of HipHop knowledge its opened my eyes to things i might've never realized about hip hop and im only like 100 pages into it.Its ...

Omin Flow Looks like we gotta OmniPresent Hoe/
Only thing u play with more then words is the Dick u Blow/

Recorded str8 from the backyard all freestyle

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Do You Remember 1985 Eric.B Rakim And KRS-One/
Chris VS Nelly Slim VS Benzino Battles Lost or Won/
Know Eminem Eternally Burned Benzino and the Source/
Knowledge Reigns KRS-One Destroyed Nelly Of Cource/
Remember when Nas and Jay-Z were Deep in Beefin/
Ether Burned Jiggas Soul As Nas is Sinkin Teeth ...

not bad good flow some good vocab n alrite metas not bad for a lil show off piece
unable to judge meaning frum it though

Older freestyle around 09 bad quality but the lyrics still shine thru sick

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I enjoyed this excerpts flow and the last 4 lines were sick and my fav's of the piece other than that i could feel this piece was personal but couldve gone deeper not bad just wasnt feelin youre style
peace

Precise your off Percison you couldnt hit a target like Ray Charles/
Just a Lil Lost Boy Acting Crazy Uppercut u Neverland Bitch lost your marbles

its debatable who saved that game artest possibly i say fisher cuz after we got in the lead with that three boston never recovered

appreciate the feedback though

Homie Lose the comic book avatar Atleast/
Yeah your the beast the one called pussy Yeast/
Like Lil wayne you must think youre the best/
Leave your Bitch ass apologizing like Kanye West/

Not sure who i gve feedback too so i will on the next person who spits
Here i go a lil key/freestyle


Drop Hot Topics,Like Wet Panties of Gothics/
Power in Pockets,Like my pants are full of Light sockets/
I Remember,Living on the streets in December/
Drug Embers,A demon in my soul slowly Enters ...

Im Hated like a Laker Fan Inside Boston/
Champ they Lost-In,Flip Tricks Like Eric Koston/
Love Kobe but I save The Game Like D.Fisher/
MC Disser,My shot & blunt Both were Swisher/
Out for Blood Twilight Bitch Its Crimson/
A Fuck U Mission,Talking shit Like Mel Gibson/
Weak Minds Hate Me like Nazi's ...

it was alrite in concept idea and lyrics
the flow was a lil better
some of the metas were basic
It did have a frank lucas feel and
im not saying its bad but i felt you couldve took this verse deeper

peace