alright ill work on it more thank u much mayne

i love this kinda stuff deep insightful staying on topic the wordplay vocab multis it was great keep it up

a bombardment of blows from a heartless foe a true artist knows u gotta sharpen the flow u gotta attack tactically craft a masterpiece mathematically countin on fools equals catastrophy Gods on my side, so to battle me is blasphomy how they spit such bullshit honestly baffles me i drool when im fast...

ridiculous ridiculous ridiculous damn ridiculous

its short and to the point nice for what it is with the subject it touches on if u feel like it make a verse its real stuff we can relate to and u got the talent id like to see what u come up with but that just me....

u know ur on the internet right? even if you can back up all the talk in real life ur tough typin on a keyboard. ur not bad but ur not good enough lyrically for ne ones feelins to get hurt off those comments if u wanna do something up your game play it there way and beat em till then stop the tough ...