you need to work on the basics before recording, such as writing ability & flow, it seemed like you were all over the place to be honest, like you didnt know how to stay on beat..keep working though Yeah i hear you, how do you think i could work on my flow? is it just practicing or is there any...

1st off Welcome to illest lyrics.. im Deciple... ok to business now... Turn the beat up some.. quality could be better but you work with what you can... you sound like an off-brand Lil Wayne, your flow for the style you were spitting was ok.. You need to mix it up a little, it was very traditional,...

Hi, this is a song im working on, some feedback would be greatly apreciated, thanks.