thanks for the feedback gangstah, upping for more feedback

accelerating off the rails of the Sick-Train,witness the way i spit-rain,
no big-pay but my bars give off great knowledge so they call me the wise-inmate

my price is fake,so im steady lighting L's,my times spent precisely well,
harry potter couldnt stop my thunderous rain if he had the lightning ...

upping for some feedback

good shit,

pretty gangsta verse i guess,

immaculate spectacular rap fanatic,im living in this jungle daily,no madagascar
shitting on society with the pidgeons and my writtens go fast as nascars,

back that ass whore,tha skills and abilities,come quick if you do even quicker willingly
feel like mother nature yall mothafuckaz is killin-me ...

Everlasting enigmatic steady currents dropping deadly on the earth cursed by the magic
laughing as the sand from the clock drops Eternally,guap got knowledge like the kids in fraternities

centuries i been devouring,weak-minded cowards,couldnt come clean on the track if they showered
sours what i ...

i hop on verses like confuscious, whos this,so ludacris
its el-guap,young bob the builder im moving bricks,

100 grams goin ham like spam,money threw tha roof
if they aint say i was the man,tell em nigga,who is you???

pitbull in dis shit these other rappers just poodle-food
type of rappers dat ...

this here off the top,aint a janitor but bitch ill rock ya mop,
then mop the block,clean it up with the glocks i stock

on top,so back off, most of you cats is fags on computers tryna whack off
my niggas find where you live n shoot shit up like black ops

got so many 9's im like wheres the math ...

hell yea thanks for the feedback bro, uppin on dis shit

thanks for the feedback, always greatly appreciated
its good to hear someones feeling the shit,

invisible,invincible,niggas cannot find me,bruce lee,jet li when it comes to fighting
feel like im hidin', c.i.a, f.b.i. top secret agents tryna tame this lion
i roam the jungle roaring louder than thunder,humble cause i never fumble like the Giants punter
never under,always on point,gotta stay ...

always thought this dude was hella sick since i seen him on the grind time rap battles on youtube, never seen all this ish though,thats watsup

i'd say Lil B killed hip-hop,

thanks for the advice, real-talk next time i drop a piece
im gonna focus way harder and try to go with a topic and such,
like the topic says its just a key style i was bored and blowed as fuck