ok man here u go

Ill destroy you once and come back and do it again u get 're-served'
You wanna observe told me to spit first so now u gettin 'pre-served'
Now see I dont 'pre-write',I 'free-write', in the 'mean-while'
You could steal from clothing stores and still not come up with a good 'free ...

ok i'm here
check

-- Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:03 am --

i might be a little late with my post, maybe a couple of hours at the most.

-- Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:22 pm --

is this still on

step up

sounds good
8 bars 16 lines right

i could be wrong here but isn't zeus a greek god and midas an egyptian king.
if so then u made a little error havin them in the same rhyme.

no hate.

this was dope man. i like this alot.

I'm holding my heart, you can shock me later, I feel so lonely/
I first started noticing marks when you were lifting the groceries/
you know me, I watched you , oh so closely, I wouldn't let bro see/
I even focused on your nose bleeds, if only you would have ...

wuts up peeps

I kick polysyllabic rhyme schemes, but that stuffs the basics
But I’m in a chill mood homie, sippin’, lips puff on the matrix
Every kid shows me respect when i step in the place
Cos if not i sever brains an’ twists necks into several shapes
Simple fact of the matter is this rap thing ...