I thought this was executed nicely...it does seem like your just talking shit though if you really want someone to take a piece like this seriously....dig deeper man... you gotta draw out some raw emotion for this piece for people to understand what your saying you don't want to come off as an ...

This was a good piece...nah....it was a great piece
I can really relate to everything you said in this piece
which made me think about a lot all over again...great job man
everything about this was smooth..keep dropping

A nice drop my dude, I'm feeling the multi usage
your flow was on point throughout the whole thing to me
pretty good just for a keystyle..keep dropping my dude
your skill is still there

I'll write you a verse

thanx bro appreciate it

This was a pretty nice piece my dude, I'm feeling the vibe the flow was on point in the beginning but towards the other half it started losing it's touch...regardless..theres a lot of nice one liners here i'll take your Possession Of Me like a Prenup ^^^^^^that line was nice you should add to this ...

thanx man

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YGc6CTrIxIY&feature=related[/video] My words could magnify and put a larger picture to a bastards life while you try to pass with lies, my dick is getting pacified lips to genital, magnatized, my poetry alone is like a traffic light I won't stop til' it's read ...

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdaAyZTty2s[/video] I let my mind rest, and let my spirit give my pen guidance imagine if we were left silent, everything social was now left private the sky never met pilots, all clocks were broken we were left timeless we evolved from lesser primates, but our ...

Thanx guys

This was a pretty cool concept I like the idea behind it
the usage of water the way you brought it full circle was nice
starting the way it did and ending the way it did, it was cool
the flow got iffy at times but it still seems like a flawless piece..nice drop my dude

I was feeling when you started using the search bar lines
afterwards you really didn't finish as strong as you should
but it was a nice little drop, just work on your consistency
it's kinda hard to do it when you set your first few bars too high

this shit really didn't rhyme
I have nothing to say about this

The flow on this was monsterous
I was feeling the whole piece for the most part
the multi usage in the middle had some trouble
but after that you picked it back up and kept it moving
this was a ill drop though...keep it up my dude

this was a nice piece plex...a nice funny vibe around it
made me laugh...nice little drop