I liked this one, the emotional part was good and the idea is nice. I bet all of us have felt like this at least once in our lifetime.

everybody hates me is it because of the person i am?
does my attitude really show that i don't give a damn?
everybody is against me yet nobody cares
this world is ...

nice piece, all I can say is WORD! lol

thanks a lot for the positive feed hazard!

upping!!

thanks man I appreciate it

upping!

yeah I agree the structure could've been better but otherwise this drop is good. The storytelling is nice!

fav line:
Didnt Try To Squeeze Just Waved Tha Piece Tryin Ta Scare Him
Tha Metal Was Clashin While Tha Shell Was Flashin And He Still Wasnt Carin

yeah I've been to other sites but I was told to find myself a site where people understand poetry so I came back here lol

EkomS wrote:it was alright.. alot of repetition in this but enjoyed the questions u had asking

^^^word, I think the question is so good that you could've write quite long poem about it. The short one is aight too though

hahaha I couldn't stop laughing when I read this!

An Old Mill stands still on a rocky hill
The slopes are steep, barren and lifeless
The stunted plants sway in the silence

The quiet griping of the Mill echoes in the wind
And fills our empty hearts with the memory of the spring

When the fumes of the burning wood made us hard to breath
And those ...

I've got worms under my skin and slugs in my eyes
Bugeyed, blind eyes stareing up to the sky
Not white but grey, pupils light yellow not blue
Brains around me and still I'm thinking of you
Hole in the back of my head size of an orange
You always said I'm never still, now I'm stoic
Coagulated pond of ...

I'm going to London next month. And I'm also going to drink alcohol until my liver looks like a jellyfish ^^

i voted no. i have some bi friends and 2 gay ones, and if people fancy others of the same sex who are you to judge. Most of you arent even religious, and it was religion that placed this whole homophobic issue upon us IMO. guys love lesbians, but hate gay men. nice

^^^^agreed, besides who gives a ...

DMX-Angel lol acctually my mom loves it already lol

Missy Elliott-She's A Bitch

bullshit dj lol anaheim is good, never watched the show though lmao