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by ugly
Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:50 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: qucikie, feed, dueces
Replies: 2
Views: 956

qucikie, feed, dueces

if i was fat id do a belly roll, eat jelly whole cuz im already slow but im not so i guess all thats left is sex wit extraterrestrials im freakin starvin kids, so i harvest limbs in apartments with the walls clothed with loose cartalidge, looks so marvolous in a basement in-cased with two asians abo...
by ugly
Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:50 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: FW
Replies: 1
Views: 960

Re: FW

Super short my dude, and this style of wrtitting had me confused so i could catch your rythm scheme majority of the time. Cypher more often

3/10 cuz of really short length
by ugly
Thu Jul 30, 2009 11:24 pm
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: freestyle cypher
Replies: 117
Views: 48277

Re: freestyle cypher

u dropped a cool verse, few bars are little stretched ^^^^ its hard to spit, walken with honest drips, my fluid, its.... gone n missed, the swet of an acid trip drips, a feen uses it my insecurities block thoughts while my music blits im accusing this envirment, this generations shit indulging in me...
by ugly
Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:22 am
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: freestyle cypher
Replies: 117
Views: 48277

Re: freestyle cypher

like ur wordplay ^^^ now i dont wanna burn my bridges, cuz i wanna return to this prison I yern for the women, in these minutes im stricken, sickened of liven soften my ridges, often like my arm injected off in the kitchen am i wrong for this privilege, as im calm armed with a witness if i weld that...
by ugly
Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:32 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: A vision
Replies: 3
Views: 1264

Re: A vision

i havent read your last drop but this flow'd well, you could have used more multis , your bars were a tad bit stretched so It fell off at some points but I always find out the gist. Over all this was an above average piece but still lacking general key elements, but elevation will take care of that ...
by ugly
Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:30 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: obama obama
Replies: 3
Views: 1105

obama obama

I ask a chance as I glance, tranced in reverie they say dance, as they rant to sever me we're haulted at prospering so obviously the benefit of the doubt is favored in their policies a new world order? is a spewed swirl'd boulder on our shoulders, our names documented in folders we're drunk off fame...
by ugly
Thu Jun 25, 2009 11:35 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: staying active (feed me)
Replies: 2
Views: 986

staying active (feed me)

u never put in work or smoked a blunt, where u from hater? your only similarity to weed is that your a "chronic Mastrbater" Im waitin for saints n got no patients delayin reincarnation forgotten and forsaken for four days-n fuckin whores-waist-in blast u wit a kamehameha like saiyans, leav...
by ugly
Thu Jun 25, 2009 11:06 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Its all reveries
Replies: 4
Views: 1568

Re: Its all reveries

thanx for the feed
by ugly
Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:40 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Its all reveries
Replies: 4
Views: 1568

Its all reveries

as my jaw drops I drew a scream, my palms got full of steam fear fought off da joy music brings, my babys mom now has a eulogy dis feels like wen applaud stops, I kno da audience is using me my thoughts brought amusing things, i wanna mute these dreams never got a marriage, or a carriage, just left ...
by ugly
Sun Jun 07, 2009 2:02 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Real talk after my dream
Replies: 1
Views: 867

Real talk after my dream

Listening to its words I get mixed signals so i check the thesaurus rythm'd it a chorus, everyone pulled their sticks n mine was da shortest It was a mistake thinkin it'll relate or replace an empty cemetary Maybe it'd get me out of this grave, vou'd Id stay but it smiled to say'.. "im goin bac...
by ugly
Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:38 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Mama Know Love/Ghetto Tale
Replies: 3
Views: 1380

Re: Mama Know Love/Ghetto Tale

well the reck guy basically broke it down so I dont kno wat to tell you mane

elevate, stay active, keep flowin in the cypher
by ugly
Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:36 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 7 Bars
Replies: 6
Views: 1888

Re: 7 Bars ( Still Active )

I totaly didnt understand any bars or wordplay in this piece "Like unicycles wit no balancin." No dis-respect to you but everything was just so random like "Girls be like I WONDER if I could be his WOMAN without a LASSO " I dont know how to got this concept of just scribbling any...
by ugly
Sun May 31, 2009 3:46 pm
Forum: Hip Hop Discussion
Topic: Trick Trick - The curse of the yung berg chain Sooo funny
Replies: 2
Views: 1046

Trick Trick - The curse of the yung berg chain Sooo funny

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DfRUQWo1SoA&feature=fvst


I know this is soo old, but its fuckin funny as fuck I just came across this bullshit. After hearing this Im entertained for the week, DAYYUUM!!!
by ugly
Sun May 31, 2009 3:00 pm
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Existance PT 1
Replies: 0
Views: 914

Existance PT 1

From what i could graspe, this is what it is Humans, a duplicating mammal enduring great lengths & time great strength, in-twined with metal and thoughts of false judgment can be effective, reality isnt always intended when created, anthropoids and closest to them, mammalian existed only with ve...
by ugly
Sun May 31, 2009 1:59 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Subject of fascism (READ)
Replies: 4
Views: 1332

Re: Subject of fascism (READ)

good lookin on feed, I;ll hit chu back on ur next drops

uppin

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