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- Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:04 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Untitled
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2455
Re: Untitled
the fuck man? soulo : First I feel annoyed and bothered, I awoke from slumber to a world devoid of colors where people destroy each other and make it their choice to suffer ruckus: "I'm annoyed with all these days that are devoid of color/ People destroy each other like its our choice to suffer...
- Fri Aug 27, 2010 3:30 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Flawless Rawness
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1992
Re: Flawless Rawness
arrgh i wanna say this is another amazing drop from you 10/10
But i cant.
This just seems very mediocre to me.
The metaphores are very overused and the rhymes are so simple and i dont know about anyone else but i felt like the flow was quite choppy.
id have to say its a 7/10
You can do better
But i cant.
This just seems very mediocre to me.
The metaphores are very overused and the rhymes are so simple and i dont know about anyone else but i felt like the flow was quite choppy.
id have to say its a 7/10
You can do better
- Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:47 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Futuristic Flow
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1346
Re: Futuristic Flow
Its like a good version of a run-on sentance
Your flow never stops damnn
8/10
and its good to finally see some more stuff from you man
been a whillee
Your flow never stops damnn
8/10
and its good to finally see some more stuff from you man
been a whillee
- Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:41 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Beauty
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2528
Re: Beauty
Good job man you do more topics like this. You really shined in this
8/10
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8/10
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- Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:20 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Man's Story
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1257
Re: The Man's Story
could you really grow a rose when all you're given is shit? Asian descent faced hatred by the hands of racists father died by peacemakers images I can't erase it watched my mother beaten by loan-sharks ever since I've kept my goals sharp, my dome smart ^That part really stood out for me, I honestly ...
- Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:34 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Confuzzled
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2028
Re: Confuzzled
Jobe u aint nowhere near gonzos level duuude
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- Tue Jun 29, 2010 7:36 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Confuzzled
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2028
Re: Confuzzled
"Gather my rhyme book and sell it to writers/ My lines swellin in size, call it elephantitis/" Best bar of the whole piece Again as usually it flowed near perfection and the content was great, I feel though like you really shine when you put emotions into your writtens instead of just raw ...
- Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:09 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Scrape
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1397
Re: Scrape
I really like this drop gonzo, You can feel the stress behind it and the emotions, The unsureness of the future. Etc. As always flow is on point except for: Feel like I'm cornered, what more can I afford to lose/ And the weeks are long when there's nothin to adore or look forward to/ I felt like the...
- Thu Jun 10, 2010 5:03 am
- Forum: The Lounge
- Topic: Most Hated 2010 - Mid Year
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2070
Re: Most Hated 2010 - Mid Year
Hazard and shady
- Mon May 10, 2010 8:33 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Def's Poison (Dis ones for da Illest fam!)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1378
Re: Def's Poison (Dis ones for da Illest fam!)
Sorry man but this is garbage... I had a feeling it would be shit just from the opener "AYO. 100k in Coke!, 250k on da Benz Gettin high in sensation afta da car jackin, Den buyin Ice? Man...Dats priceless!" Please aquire a better taste in rappers, Cause clearly the shit you been listning t...
- Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:08 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: You Cant Save Em All Part 1
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1978
Re: You Cant Save Em All Part 1
Bumping this because i keep going back to this written everytime i go on illest
Bumping also because i want haze to see this and FUCKING FINISH IT GAHH
Bumping also because i want haze to see this and FUCKING FINISH IT GAHH
- Thu Apr 15, 2010 2:27 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Battle Me
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1783
Re: Battle Me
Holy shit i almost missed this , Was buried in other scripts lol The flow was PERFECTION. But i feel as if you couldve done better. The punches just dont have anything special about them Overall id give this drop from YOU a 7/10 if someone else had wrote this id probably give them a 8-9 Its still am...
- Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:36 am
- Forum: The Lounge
- Topic: Call Of Duty MW2
- Replies: 17
- Views: 3207
Re: Call Of Duty MW2
Bad company 2 is 10x better.
CoD mw 2 is full of faggoty little kids that talk shit. Pisses me teh fuck off ... since im not that good LOL
xboxlive - Rainman1344
CoD mw 2 is full of faggoty little kids that talk shit. Pisses me teh fuck off ... since im not that good LOL
xboxlive - Rainman1344
- Sat Apr 03, 2010 12:28 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Lame
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2017
Re: Lame
I dont know if im the only one that noticed this. but not alot of fresh shit in here, Most of its from your Big ass cypher drop a couple months back, and some cypher shit you did Not sayin its bad or anything, i was hopin for some brand new ruckus, Needles to say, their was some new stuff in their a...
- Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:31 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Tipsy/ Tips
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1283
Re: Tipsy/ Tips
Damn son I can write better and I'm just a fanboy.
But serious that was wack as hell, maybe would sound good as an intro or some shit..
But serious that was wack as hell, maybe would sound good as an intro or some shit..